Thread: New Hope

very awesome poem being alone can really test one sanity
and sometimes test there will to survive or to keep going,
its a sad part of life that caring for others while putting your self
second or even last means sacrificing more than anyone will ever truly
know, but its worth it in the end because the ones you love and want
to be safe and happy will always have someone there for them.

this is what i get from this poem and it it really has a lot of emotion in
it i loved how described the feelings here and i cant wait to read another

Wow you were right on target. That is exactly what I was going for. I had writer's block for a few months because of some stuff I was going through. But now it seems I'm making a come back. Thanks again for the comment.

A few grammar issues.