New Love

Loves touch eternal a single
stroke to a cheek that's pressed
to your hand , time stands still
as warm breath caresses the skin
of there hand.

Eyes meet as the stars dance
nothing is said but everything is
understood , time eternal never
ending what makes there love so
much better?

The smile that says everything,
the look that takes away the lonely
night , a fire crackles as the shadows
of what might be dance over a makeshift
tent.

Everything has its time and place
and this time is for them ,no matter
the reason love comes in so many
ways but only one is right for them
will they make it thriough the night
or just fade?

thats so beautiful^^ i wish i could just come up with something like that^-^

ahh...thats beautiful... i like the description in it ^^ but u made a spelling mistake in the last stanza.. :p

*sighs* this gives me nice pleasant memories... ^^ good job my friend i will keep on reading ur poems...keep up the good work will ya ;)

*cries*....grrr...why do i always want to start crying...very good description holder....very good*sniffles*keep it ↑my friend........

*cries with sis* wow what a beautiful emotional poem! I loved every bit of it! You write such wonderful poems hope to see more chris-sama!!!!!^^

Such a beautiful poem and it also sounds like would make a great romantic evening. I can picture us doing that and having alot of fun. Terriffic job I can't wait to read more.

Wonderfull... this made me smile and become very deamy... such a sweet piece of work here!!!! Really enjoyed reading this...

"Eyes meet as the stars dance
nothing is said but everything is
understood , time eternal never
ending what makes there love so
much better?"

^ my fav stranza, especially the last two lines... just onderful... and made me think.. indeed what makes something sometimes so much better? O.o no idea...