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    New Love

    Loves touch eternal a single
    stroke to a cheek that's pressed
    to your hand , time stands still
    as warm breath caresses the skin
    of there hand.

    Eyes meet as the stars dance
    nothing is said but everything is
    understood , time eternal never
    ending what makes there love so
    much better?

    The smile that says everything,
    the look that takes away the lonely
    night , a fire crackles as the shadows
    of what might be dance over a makeshift
    tent.

    Everything has its time and place
    and this time is for them ,no matter
    the reason love comes in so many
    ways but only one is right for them
    will they make it thriough the night
    or just fade?
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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    Re: New Love

    thats so beautiful^^ i wish i could just come up with something like that^-^

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    Re: New Love

    ahh...thats beautiful... i like the description in it ^^ but u made a spelling mistake in the last stanza..

    *sighs* this gives me nice pleasant memories... ^^ good job my friend i will keep on reading ur poems...keep up the good work will ya

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    Re: New Love

    *cries*....grrr...why do i always want to start crying...very good description holder....very good*sniffles*keep it ↑my friend........
    Yeah, Bye.

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    Re: New Love

    *cries with sis* wow what a beautiful emotional poem! I loved every bit of it! You write such wonderful poems hope to see more chris-sama!!!!!^^



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    Re: New Love

    Such a beautiful poem and it also sounds like would make a great romantic evening. I can picture us doing that and having alot of fun. Terriffic job I can't wait to read more.
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    Re: New Love

    Wonderfull... this made me smile and become very deamy... such a sweet piece of work here!!!! Really enjoyed reading this...

    "Eyes meet as the stars dance
    nothing is said but everything is
    understood , time eternal never
    ending what makes there love so
    much better?"

    ^ my fav stranza, especially the last two lines... just onderful... and made me think.. indeed what makes something sometimes so much better? O.o no idea...

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