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| King Of Darkness Join Date: May 2006 Location: someplace where the only light is the moon above
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![]() ![]() Credits: 5,581 | New Love Loves touch eternal a single stroke to a cheek that's pressed to your hand , time stands still as warm breath caresses the skin of there hand. Eyes meet as the stars dance nothing is said but everything is understood , time eternal never ending what makes there love so much better? The smile that says everything, the look that takes away the lonely night , a fire crackles as the shadows of what might be dance over a makeshift tent. Everything has its time and place and this time is for them ,no matter the reason love comes in so many ways but only one is right for them will they make it thriough the night or just fade?
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![]() ![]() Credits: 59,502 | Re: New Love ahh...thats beautiful... i like the description in it ^^ but u made a spelling mistake in the last stanza.. *sighs* this gives me nice pleasant memories... ^^ good job my friend i will keep on reading ur poems...keep up the good work will ya ![]() |
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![]() Credits: 11,584 | Re: New Love *cries*....grrr...why do i always want to start crying...very good description holder....very good*sniffles*keep it ↑my friend........
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![]() Credits: 19,648 | Re: New Love *cries with sis* wow what a beautiful emotional poem! I loved every bit of it! You write such wonderful poems hope to see more chris-sama!!!!!^^ |
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![]() ![]() Credits: 2,616 | Re: New Love Such a beautiful poem and it also sounds like would make a great romantic evening. I can picture us doing that and having alot of fun. Terriffic job I can't wait to read more.
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![]() Credits: 49,619 | Re: New Love Wonderfull... this made me smile and become very deamy... such a sweet piece of work here!!!! Really enjoyed reading this... "Eyes meet as the stars dance nothing is said but everything is understood , time eternal never ending what makes there love so much better?" ^ my fav stranza, especially the last two lines... just onderful... and made me think.. indeed what makes something sometimes so much better? O.o no idea... |
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