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    Re: new poem

    Oh I was just asking if you've written any other poems because
    I'm curious
    and might want to read them if you've posted or will post them =)
    and don't let the other's comments get you down
    everyone's picking at the punctuation =P
    really i dont think it matter's that much
    it's your poem
    and you can put it together however you like
    they didn't create it, you did.
    So perk up! lol =)

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    Re: new poem

    Quote Originally Posted by KimiFemi View Post
    Oh I was just asking if you've written any other poems because
    I'm curious
    and might want to read them if you've posted or will post them =)
    and don't let the other's comments get you down
    everyone's picking at the punctuation =P
    really i dont think it matter's that much
    it's your poem
    and you can put it together however you like
    they didn't create it, you did.
    So perk up! lol =)
    awwww arent you nice! i might not be putting more up here though, it seems that to many people have a probelm with punctuation and spelling.
    ive got alot of my site....
    but once again thanks.
    your curious? hahhaha i dont know if thats good or bad.
    as for perking up... i dont really do that, im a loner and dont have much to be happy about.
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    Re: new poem

    I know! I am nice arent I? lol!
    anyway why wouldnt you put up other poems?
    even bad criticism means you've got people interested enough to look lol
    isnt that the whole point of this site to gain the interest of others?
    if you dont get replies then you might as well write in a journal instead
    just my opinion of cousre lol
    anyway I hope you do feel up to posting more poems later
    but no pressure
    can't perk up? how about a smile instead??

    ~~~ K ~~~

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    Re: new poem

    i really dont do smiles either never had anything to smile about, but since you liked my poems i guess ill post them just for you
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    Re: new poem

    AAAAWWWW lol thanks =)
    but really never ever anything to smile about??
    =P
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    Re: new poem

    well ive never had a reason to be that happy. and your most welcome, even if only one person enjoys my writings that is more then enough for me

    blastin
    rock the masses, playin it all the time
    blastin up and down the block, old school, new school
    i aint nobodys fool
    its time to let it fly to hold on and jive
    rhythmin, buyin, never twotiming

    its not my style to be lost in the fuse of the lust
    but this bus aint going nowhere no time soon
    i got a new beat to play for you
    this time it will be neat and a bit more on the top
    heartaches and stomaches all in the past
    they aint going to be catchin up fast
    this is going to last as long as i can

    its time you met the new man around here
    with the flash and the clash of all that talent
    and such
    aint going out like that so understand where im coming from
    broke and left out in the cold is where im at
    but soon ill be in all your hearts keeping warm
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    Re: new poem

    Ohhh I like this one it's got a diff tone
    kinda fun and very urban =)

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    Re: new poem

    Quote Originally Posted by KimiFemi View Post
    Ohhh I like this one it's got a diff tone
    kinda fun and very urban =)
    urban? hahahh i guess so, i got more down below, smackdown, firecracker, and god of death
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