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    A New Song

    I used to sing of the sadness in the world
    Depression filled every word
    Hatred came off me in waves

    I didn't care who knew
    Everyone in my mind needed to know anyway
    But somehow
    Some way
    You've manged to change my tune

    I now sing of happiness and glee
    Love and joy
    Emotions that only you can make me deploy

    Now I laugh and smile when I sing
    Who knew the world could be so beautiful
    When I think of it now
    The world was always so grim to me

    You've changed my outlook
    I see things in a whole new light now
    Now that you've arrived

    You're my light
    The words to my happiest song
    The warmth when I am cold

    You are the world to me
    So please
    Don't destroy me again



    Hope you guys like this. I'm just musing as usual, but I do hope you enjoy it!

    Our love will go on until the end of time. I will always be yours and you will be mine.

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    Re: A New Song

    well that reminds me of a few things, anyway great poem loved it and great spelling hope to see more

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    Re: A New Song

    Such a great love poem. Lovely but at the same time a little sad... Great!!! I love it!
    I liked this part:
    You are the world to me
    So please
    Don't destroy me again
    Reminds me of myself whenever I get into another relationship... It's better if you forget about the possibility of him destroying your life so you could enjoy what you have. ^^

    A nice work Neves!!! ^^

    My recommended fanfic: "Dreamer" by Scourge

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