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    a new year

    a new year

    Ok it’s a new year.
    A new time for love friendship
    And even a broken heart.
    But it’s for a clean start.
    So let’s go out have fun strut your stuff
    Because it’s all going to be good.
    New beginnings old ending
    For what we wont forget.
    The good or bad times.
    But all hopefully going to get better.
    The bad erased the good looked in a finer light.

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    Re: a new year

    This was a simple short poem. I think certain aspects involving the subject could be expounded upon, however it was still sweet.
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    Re: a new year

    Short, sweet, and too the point! I like this poem equinn, after all it is a new year and my favorite line from this poem is "New beginnings old ending" perfectly sums up it up for the new year! Nice Job!

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