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    ~Next Time, I Promise~

    I can never stop chatting about you,
    But when I see you I can’t talk.
    I always long to dance with you,
    But when I’m around you I can’t walk.

    I cannot live without you,
    But when I’m with you, I die.
    I can’t stop smiling at you,
    But once you’re gone, I cry.

    Can’t I decide what to do?
    Can’t I control my emotions?
    Well, I guess I’ll have to learn-
    Now this is a new notion.

    Next time I see you I promise to talk,
    And inside I will not die.
    Next time I see you I promise to walk,
    And I promise not to cry.
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    i made this poem a few days ago, and it is very special to me because i consider it a promise that i made myself
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    You laugh at me because I'm different. I laugh at you because your all the same.

    Thanks Hieislove for the siggy!

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    Re: ~Next Time, I Promise~

    It was a nice poem. It seemed to flow very well.

    Can’t I decide what to do?
    Can’t I control my emotions?
    Well, I guess I’ll have to learn-
    Now this is a new notion.
    That was my favorite part.

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    Re: ~Next Time, I Promise~

    That is a very wonderful poem.I like it very much.
    Made by- Ryomakurosaki (Thank you sooooo much!!) ^__^

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    Re: ~Next Time, I Promise~

    thanks a lot peoplz! srry, i like that word- peoplz...
    You laugh at me because I'm different. I laugh at you because your all the same.

    Thanks Hieislove for the siggy!

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    Re: ~Next Time, I Promise~

    That...was...beautiful. Plz keep it up. I'd say its special to me also.
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    Re: ~Next Time, I Promise~

    beautiful, my favorite part of the poem being the the 3rd and 4th stanzas and again, good work changing the mood of the poem

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    Re: ~Next Time, I Promise~

    wanting courage to admit
    you like someone is what everyone
    goes through from time to time
    i like hoe you desrcibe this very nice poem
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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    Re: ~Next Time, I Promise~

    Hey That is a great poeM!!!! I bet You didn't think i could get onn wile i was away...you'll think better next time! I love this Poem Who is it too MJM?????? Well you can't have himm!!!!!!!!! PM me ok


    Buy~Bye~
    Moving on Is the hardest Part

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