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    The Night

    A wolf's howl is heard in the distance
    to some people its a frightening influence
    other hear it and pass by with ignorance
    No matter what happens, it won't make a difference

    The moon is the beauty of the night
    she looks upon you, and you never lose her light.
    although the sounds of the night may give you a great fright
    you'll never loose her sight, till the sun is bright

    So calm the hour, so calm the night,
    filled with fright, and a lonely light
    she brings up, till you meet his scythe
    the grim reaper, the taker of life

    The moon the beauty of the night
    the grim reaper, he who brings the fright
    hand in hand forever in life
    that's the beauty of night
    You should stop talking about your dreams, and start making them.

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    Re: The Night

    i like this tribute to death very awesome
    you really know how to get dark in that one
    part saying

    The moon the beauty of the night
    the grim reaper, he who brings the fright
    hand in hand forever in life
    that's the beauty of night

    very awesome i love this cant wait to read another
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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    Re: The Night

    Nice Poem.... hehe... I Love It...
    i like this tribute to death very awesome
    you really know how to get dark in that one
    part saying

    The moon the beauty of the night
    the grim reaper, he who brings the fright
    hand in hand forever in life
    that's the beauty of night
    I Agree...
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    Re: The Night

    Nice peom man, i can see that you used the words night in every stanza of your poem, overall it was a really kool poem, i hope to be seeing more of your poems man.

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    Re: The Night

    Luigi, I like your work without rhyming.
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    Re: The Night

    Quote Originally Posted by Kasai
    Luigi, I like your work without rhyming.
    I don't get it Kasai, but uh...... ok, thanx guys n.n
    You should stop talking about your dreams, and start making them.

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