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  Otaku  Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: winnipeg
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 Credits: 7,843 | The Night the Night The night is deep, silent A nocturnes cry is heard Serene A gentle breeze sways the flowers The moon is full Clouds enshroud the eerie moon The soft rays become distant Now in the pale rays of first light The nocturne closes her eyes and waits… ------------ I know, I know... it only has nine lines... it's a very old and very early piece I made... before I was incapable of making a happy/abstract poem... it was originally one large stanza, but I've found that this sort of writing is bothersome... to many people.. soon I'll be able to get up some of new works, they just have to go through 'revision boot camp,' and such. As always,
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