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    The Night

    Shrouded by darkness
    My Light eyes flutter open tonight
    Dully looking aorund boredly and arising slowly
    Walking in to a black midnight
    Like a zombie, apart from the world and silent
    I see a figure
    Jumping and almost begining to feed
    When i see your face, I stop
    Back away reveals a mysterious figure
    Knowing who you are
    Smiling sweetly, apologizing
    I Hug you
    You hug back, lovingly
    Then as daylight creeps
    As a cat does when stalking a mouse
    Sadly looking upon your face
    Needing to leave, apologizing again
    Exchanging goodbyes, hugging and kissing
    Silently leaving, heart actually beating
    I know in my heart that...................
    I Love You

    i wrote this in honor of ,y b/f chris and for valentines day.............when i was sick........

    Neji hates when i hug other people.......
    he'll hit you with a hammer if he sees you....

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    Re: The Night

    That was a sweet poem. I hope your b/f liked it. I can't wait to read your next one.
    "Sunset Kisses Along The Beach"
    Made for me by HolderofTheDarkChalice
    Thanks so much I love it!

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    Re: The Night

    hehe meee too i haven;t givent it to him yet......... im waiting for Valentines day...... ^^

    Neji hates when i hug other people.......
    he'll hit you with a hammer if he sees you....

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    Re: The Night

    It's sweet... I've written a poem for a friend. He loved it... I'm sure your b/f will love this one too. I love the last line, though it's is often hard for me to say to anyone outside my family. ^_^ I approve! ^_^

    Come dance in the rain with me, no one is watching.

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    hehe......... it rare i tell anyone that i love them im not the kind of peropn to get attached to people........ hehe well anyways thanks for the compliment Darkened_star i really appreaciate it...........
    i just hope he doesnt think im weird.......

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    he'll hit you with a hammer if he sees you....

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    by the way i post my poems on quizilla too.............. my user name on it is EvilLilGoth ^^

    Neji hates when i hug other people.......
    he'll hit you with a hammer if he sees you....

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    Re: The Night

    Nice poem. Excelent use of imagery! A very mysterious way to show your love!
    ... Not Ever Again...

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    Re: The Night

    thankies!!!! AND HE LOVED IT!!!!! he was alll "aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaawwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww wwwwwwwwwwwwwww thats cute!!!!"

    Neji hates when i hug other people.......
    he'll hit you with a hammer if he sees you....

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