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    night creatures

    i can't seem to be able to delete my poem thread. i have a very specific reason for wanting it to be deleted. but since i don't seem to be able to i will just has to write this down so that i can take my poem off. i must say this is very inconvenient. i have searched through the Q&A to find out how to delete posts and threads and it was most unhelpful seeing as it did not explain what to do after hitting the edit button.
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    Re: night creatures

    darkish poem..... describing a pack of night wolves comes to mind

    u might need to improve on it tho

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    Re: night creatures

    Oh wow I like it
    I think that it shows that no matter what you can get what you want or something like that well keep it up hope to read more.

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    Re: night creatures

    I think it was really creative.
    I like how yuu only revealed it was wolves at theend insted of throughing it off at the first sentence...there is room to improve and I liked the words yuu used...clever to ryme it. i don't think it was verry dark as more of an awsome feeling. I really liked it...i would hope yuu write more soon...
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    Re: night creatures

    That was really creative, I injoyed reading it.

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    Re: night creatures

    That poem about the night creatures you made is, GOOD. The idea of the poem is interesting. a little more detail will make this poem great. ^^

    Thank you very much,Reese for this wonderful signature ^_^

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    Re: night creatures

    This is really good. I hope you keep writing, beacause I seem to be drawn to the titles of your poems.
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