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Sep 13, 2006, 02:12 PM
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 Credits: 130 | night creatures i can't seem to be able to delete my poem thread. i have a very specific reason for wanting it to be deleted. but since i don't seem to be able to i will just has to write this down so that i can take my poem off. i must say this is very inconvenient. i have searched through the Q&A to find out how to delete posts and threads and it was most unhelpful seeing as it did not explain what to do after hitting the edit button. Last edited by hinata89; Dec 05, 2007 at 09:54 AM. |
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Sep 16, 2006, 10:42 AM
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Credits: 557 | Re: night creatures darkish poem..... describing a pack of night wolves comes to mind u might need to improve on it tho
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Sep 16, 2006, 10:46 AM
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Credits: 12,192 | Re: night creatures Oh wow I like it I think that it shows that no matter what you can get what you want or something like that well keep it up hope to read more.
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Sep 16, 2006, 04:12 PM
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Credits: 110 | Re: night creatures I think it was really creative. I like how yuu only revealed it was wolves at theend insted of throughing it off at the first sentence...there is room to improve and I liked the words yuu used...clever to ryme it. i don't think it was verry dark as more of an awsome feeling. I really liked it...i would hope yuu write more soon...
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Sep 16, 2006, 08:29 PM
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Credits: 1,336 | Re: night creatures That poem about the night creatures you made is, GOOD. The idea of the poem is interesting. a little more detail will make this poem great. ^^
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Sep 17, 2006, 02:05 PM
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Credits: 110 | Re: night creatures This is really good. I hope you keep writing, beacause I seem to be drawn to the titles of your poems.
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