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    The night she was a fool

    The air was cool while the moon was full
    And her arm he tryed to pull.
    Yet she resisted and to that she is a fool.
    For that night he drowned in his pool.

    The reasion her arm he tryed to pull,
    Was to save her from a rageing bull.

    To his horror he thought she meet her end. She was so stiff she could not bend
    So he layed her on his soffa.
    Though she was in a coma, He thought she was dead.

    That night he meet his end,
    And never called a friend.
    For she was a fool,
    He deid in his pool.

    That is my tale of the couple that failde to comunicat and bouth went to hell.
    That is the tale of Jasmin and James.

    please tell me what u think of this poem.
    Last edited by deiuchi; May 05, 2010 at 11:21 AM. Reason: to get replys
    u never know what you have untill its gone, long gone.

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    i love this poem, it s very goood very well writed

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