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    the night she was a fool


    The air was cool while the moon was full
    And her arm he tryed to pull.
    Yet she resisted and to that she is a fool.
    For that night he drowned in his pool.

    The reasion her arm he tryed to pull,
    Was to save her from a rageing bull.

    To his horror he thought she meet her end. She was so stiff she could not bend
    So he layed her on his soffa.
    Though she was in a coma, He thought she was dead.

    That night he meet his end,
    And never called a friend.
    For she was a fool,
    He deid in his pool.

    That is my tale of the couple that failde to comunicat and bouth went to hell.
    That is the tale of Jasmin and James.
    u never know what you have untill its gone, long gone.

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    Re: the night she was a fool

    What does this have to do with the POTM theme?


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    Re: the night she was a fool

    sounds like Romeo and Juliet more than anything. >.> I don't get insanity nor sanity out of it tho

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    Re: the night she was a fool

    oh i like this poem it has a dark ending sweet keep it up!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    trust me im a ninja!

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