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    Night time Sky

    I stare at the moon
    Just to notice its face,
    The sorrow it holds.
    The tears it has cried.

    Each star holds a different sorrow:
    One for the loss of a loved one,
    One for a missing piece of their heart,
    One for the death of somebody close,
    And a million more,
    For a million more different sorrows

    The clouds hold uncried tears
    Of a lawyer,
    Of a mother,
    Of a friend,
    And a bazillion more,
    For a bazillion more people.

    The night time sky that holds the moon
    That cries for the mother that cannot,
    The clouds and the stars hold her hidden
    sorrow and show the world.
    The nighttime sky,
    Shows the world what others cannot



    (if you don't get this part"That cries for the mother that cannot"it's talking about mother earth)

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    Re: Night time Sky

    e romantic one which touch my heart~ Good job ('',)

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    Re: Night time Sky

    Nice job on this poem! It is like venelse said a romantic one! Keep up the good work and I look forward to reading more from you!

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    Re: Night time Sky

    Very nice poem and it was kinda sad too. Good job.
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    Re: Night time Sky

    Aww. A simple sweet poem. though, the transition bewtween the moon and stars couldve been a bit smoother.
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