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    Thank you for the inspiration. I will do my best *puts fist in the air* Yes. thank you kindly! and by experience i ment that i havent wroten many before, but i'm sure you knew that. lol! =^.^= thank you again for stoping by.
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    Re: Nightmare of Your Death

    That would be appriciated. While the long ones are daunting to read they are often more felt more emotional and better written. I used to write REALLY really long poems. And no problem, it was much diserved!

    You never really loved me/You never really cared/It was all just a game to boost your ego/Those feelings never really there/ I'm filing emotional bankruptcy/My heart can take no more debt/Theres no more "money" there to spend. === Besides tee hee SHE loves me!

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    Lol! yeah it is hard trying to put all your feelings a bout situations in just one littel poem, there usually too much to just stick in some little space, but when you make them longer people dont read them as much, but then again poems are for your self and not others. oh and no problem.
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    Re: Nightmare of Your Death

    oh yes.. ^^

    [QUOTE]lol Come on Highteckdudu I liked it I could see any ones lover asking that if their partner departed. good job I could visualize this one well. nicely protraied. keep it up! I hope to see more from you.[/QOUTE]

    I agree with that

    "One question is all there is to answer it all
    Why?
    But she’ll never know the real truth, will she?
    In this nightmare of your own death."

    hmm... cool ^^ nicely done. ^^

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    Re: Nightmare of Your Death

    Thank you! Yep them parts too are my favorite ones as well! thank you fro taking the time to post on my poem! *bows*
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