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    Nine

    Nine months of waiting.
    That's 270 days of confusion pain and hope.
    Nine months of regret and feeling dumb, numb
    and pretending everything is "just fine".

    Nine times I've cried in public.
    Totalling nine hours wasted on
    looking crazy in front of folks I don't know.

    Nine occasions of leaving my desk
    to go have a good crying fit in the bathroom.
    Nine hours of work that could've been finished.

    Nineteen times have I asked "why do I bother?"
    An entire paragraph's worth of text and wasted
    breath on a campaign that leads to nowhere.

    Nine times the amount of pain anyone has ever
    felt is building up in my chest. Nine times the
    resentment toward a certain person that grows
    at an increasingly rapid pace.

    Nine tries to make a stand--to find where one stands.
    Nine times I've been lead astray. Ninety percent
    of the time, I feel like what I do doesn't matter to anyone.

    Nine hundred piercing needles in my heart.
    A pain that lingers for what feels like forever.
    Nine years from now, will I still be this way?
    When I'm ninety, will any of this matter?
    Will I even remember?

    Ninety times, I've tried to forget.
    Nine times, I've been told to move around...

    Nine times, I've thought of taking it out on "him".
    Nine years ago, he was my best friend. Nine months
    ago, he betrayed me...

    Nine months of time--wasted...
    Nine months of energy--gone...


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    Re: Nine

    this is very sad....very *wipes a tear*....lots of sad emotion....i really like this poem. You're great at long poems.. it's like you're regretting something.
    anywho...well done...!!! awsome poem.

    -zainab

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    Re: Nine

    Quote Originally Posted by ihauntforlust View Post
    this is very sad....very *wipes a tear*....lots of sad emotion....i really like this poem. You're great at long poems.. it's like you're regretting something.
    anywho...well done...!!! awsome poem.

    -zainab
    Thanks. I'm glad you like this poem. This poem means plenty to me. It's the most emotional thing I've written. It's the longest poem I've written, I think.
    I sometimes feel like I regret the last nine months, but to be honest with you, I regret the last nine years or so. I've done some pretty stupid things and made some pretty dumb decisions in my past (not counting the last nine months, although you could I guess). So, I believe--as of yesterday--that nine is an evil number.

    Anyway, thanks for the comment; I appreciate you taking the time to read my work.


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    Re: Nine

    wow... *salutes* this is a genius's work.. creative indeed... my my.. good work there..
    keep it up~! ^^


    at first i tot it was 9 month of pregnancy.. XD

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    Re: Nine

    Yeah, I figured someone would bring up pregnancy, LOL. thanks for the comment. And sorry for the short reply; typing on PSP sucks. ^_^


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    Re: Nine

    very weird if you don't mind me saying so.
    I thought it was about pregnancy too, for that I am sorry.
    but it is intresting in a way.
    but I like it so happy writing

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    Re: Nine

    This poem is a great poem. I would like to see more published, you have gave me great ideas on how to write poems, i was so into your poem. GREAT JOB!!!!

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    Re: Nine

    Wow............it touched something in me..............beautiful!!!!!!!!
    Absolutely beautiful!!!!!!!
    DO NOT MAKE ME UNLEASH MY INNER DEMON

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