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  1. Apr 22, 2009 12:40 PM #1
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    No Control

    You wear me down
    and leave me broken
    like empty words
    having never been spoken

    You take and take
    never giving back
    all those little things
    that you regretfully lack.

    By and by
    through and through
    you cant stand
    that ill soon be over you

    Me forgetting you
    is like a knife through your heart
    but your agonizing pain and suffering
    is a helping hand to my new start.
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    Re: No Control

    whats this about ?????? i dont under stand interesting thow
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  3. Apr 22, 2009 12:53 PM #3
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    Re: No Control

    wow, thats really strong hope you can find someone to love again some day. I know how you feel someone really special to tabed my heart to. we went out for 3 years.
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    Re: No Control

    Wow talk about spitefull... Any way I like the way it flowed. Kind of makes me wonder if this is an actual emotion you are going through as most poems of these sort of do... Or I could be looking to deep into it. Any way, nicely done.
    "MY DEAR... I GIVE YOU THE CAPELLAN CONFEDERATION"
    AND THUS THE WAR WAS STARTED NOT BY GUN SHOT BUT BY WEDDING BELLS
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    wow, thats really strong hope you can find someone to love again some day. I know how you feel someone really special to me tabed my heart to. we went out for 3 years.
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    wow, thats really strong hope you can find someone to love again some day. I know how you feel someone really special to me stabed my heart to. we went out for 3 years.
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    Re: No Control

    Actually it is just a poem on this end. noo feelings attached to it or anyything. just a poem
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    Re: No Control

    Alright, thats good to know.

    But as I said before, well done.
    "MY DEAR... I GIVE YOU THE CAPELLAN CONFEDERATION"
    AND THUS THE WAR WAS STARTED NOT BY GUN SHOT BUT BY WEDDING BELLS
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