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  1. Apr 25, 2009 10:36 AM #9
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    Quote Originally Posted by starfire1036 View Post
    You wear me down
    and leave me broken
    like empty words
    having never been spoken

    You take and take
    never giving back
    all those little things
    that you regretfully lack.

    By and by
    through and through
    you cant stand
    that ill soon be over you

    Me forgetting you
    is like a knife through your heart
    but your agonizing pain and suffering
    is a helping hand to my new start.
    wow thats really good i can understand that in ways you should write more and show others what you're thinking and feeling it really does help i can personally tell you that it kinda does help out
    "the past is full of crap from then, the present is full of shit from now and the future is full of nothing at all"
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    Re: No Control

    Wow so this is what my girlfriend was thinking when we broke up i feel better. I'm just kinding. This is a good poem I glad to hear you didn't have any feeling attached to it.
    I know what the feel is like to have but i'm off topic.
    I is a very nice poem.
    Great job on it.
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    Re: No Control

    i have to say really nice poem it has alot of meaning to it and when i read those words they make me thing of a love i have lost but it also reminds me ofthe pain that i received because of that love...
    I've lost everything I once held dear to me all i have felt is hope and with it I''ll push myself forward and follow the even ending stream of life.....
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    Re: No Control

    love truly pierces your heart when it comes to
    leaving but thats life and you learn from the pain
    so it want be as bad next time very awesome
    poem.
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself
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