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    No doubt, No pain, No fear

    We are safe in our own little worlds,
    (All connected) no one can find us here;
    We are in our own little worlds,
    with no doubt, no pain, no fear.

    The people here
    are so kind and gentle,
    no one could tell
    that we are all mental.

    In your reality,
    we are of insanity,
    but in our reality,
    we are the normality.

    We are all the same,
    happy inside;
    We are all the same,
    crazy outside.

    In the real world cutting is bad,
    but in ours, it is a game;
    that is why in our little worlds
    we feel no pain.

    We have no doubt
    or fear in our little worlds,
    because there is nothing
    to doubt or fear.

    But people like you
    fear and doubt,
    day in, day in,
    and day out, day out.

    Doubt and fear in our world
    does not exist;
    if you have doubt and fear,
    you'll ses to exist.

    That's why in our worlds
    no one can find us,
    our own little worlds
    so deep inside us.

    If you enter our world
    you will disapear;
    It is like I said
    you all have doubts and fear.

    That's why we are safe;
    you can't make it here,
    Into our little worlds
    with no doubt, no pain, no fear.

    This was not intended to ryhme. I wrote it a while back too ^_^

    Come dance in the rain with me, no one is watching.

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    Re: No doubt, No pain, No fear

    Boy do I LOVE this poem of yours Darkened Star!!!! Just wonderful!!!! I love everything about it!!! Just great!
    The thing you're trying to say- so true, the way you wrote it-so easiy to understand and interesting to read, the feelings you created in my heart- irreplaceable!!!!
    This is a really wonderful poem. How much time did it take you to write this?

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    Re: No doubt, No pain, No fear

    I like this poem alot... it speaks the truth and yet it also appeals to everyone and everyone can use it... ^_^

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    Re: No doubt, No pain, No fear

    Quote Originally Posted by Lasura View Post
    How much time did it take you to write this?
    It took me a little while to get the wording right... I think it was a couple of days ^_^

    Thank you for the feedback. ^_^

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    Re: No doubt, No pain, No fear

    This is awesome poem. It can also can go great for a song. It's really good! Hope to see more in the future.
    「When I'm sad, I stop being sad and be awesome instead」

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    Re: No doubt, No pain, No fear

    Quote Originally Posted by KuwiRules145 View Post
    This is awesome poem. It can also can go great for a song. It's really good! Hope to see more in the future.
    That's just what I thought when reading specialy in these lines:
    In your reality,
    we are of insanity,
    but in our reality,
    we are the normality.
    It makes it even better!!!!!
    And I too can't wair for another one like this!!!!

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    Re: No doubt, No pain, No fear

    This is a great poem. truthful too. I hope i can hear more poem from you

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