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    No Longer, But..

    A heart broken in two
    Still forever
    No longer throbbing
    But still sustaining

    A soul torn in two
    Silent forever
    No longer living
    But moving by your side

    A mind shattered in two
    Dead forever
    No longer thinking
    But wanting to remember

    A body cut in two
    Lifeless forever
    No longer alive
    But still here next to you

    a new poem i wrote a moment ago.
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    Re: No Longer, But..

    sounds like two spirits got separated but anyway good poem feels like someone loss someone
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    Re: No Longer, But..

    very cool poem and devoted love like this is awesome
    and can last a life time if you let it, but sometimes it doesnt
    but that when you remember the good times so you want be sad.
    awesome poem dancy
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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    Re: No Longer, But..

    Wow! I liked this poem it you can feel the love that's involved with this poem! The emotion is portrayed well in every line! Keep up the good work!

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