So yesterday was Sunday. And I had a blast.
I went for a jog, didn't go very fast.
My sneakers got stuck to some tar on the road.
Why the F#^% is there tar on the side of the road??!
Today went by quick. I forgot what I did.
I only remember the money I hid
in the back of my jeans, during lunch at my school..
Some kid came behind me and stole it; how cruel.
Tomorrow should be better, c'mon give me a break.
Last week so crappy, and this week's been an ache.
I can only imagine the troubles ahead,
more money stolen.. diseases might spread.
Alas, Wednesday comes! A day I enjoy.
LOL, I sound like Dr.Seuess..only, I'm that little boy.
Who all he can do is just sit sit sit sit!
On a day that is rainy, while picking his zit.
Ew, Thursday I hate.. It was NOT a good day.
My mother woke up on the wrong side of the bay.
Yes, I meant to say BAY and not bed, you baboon.
I'm going for dramatics. I'm talking monsoon.
Today I threw up, food poisoning's no good.
Especially when you grew up in the hood.
GOD, I've hated these days.. I can only pray.
That this week will end soon.. HOLY SHIT! It's Friday!!
YES! Saturday's here. No more need to fear.
I get to see her. Hehe, I shall go buy some beer.
Only I can't drink any, I'm only in fifth grade.
Damn it, then when the hell am I going to get laid?!
Oh Look, Sunday has come - What a freaking surprise.
The week's gone by fast, Something I shouldn't despise.
But why should I rejoice, when it'll happen again?
It will all lead to her.. without us in a bed.
Re: No Luck
Ha ha ha... what a gasp! Very creative! This is the best poem I've seen on here in a long time. Quite a breath of fresh air too. At the very least... I can say this was inspiring. The most I can say is.... I peed a little during my read of it.
Re: No Luck
WOW Peach!! Very glad you enjoyed it!! And I'm very impressed you found it refreshing and new :) I love the way you critic the poems here, and I was sort of lingering, hoping you wouldn't skip any of mine.. and you didn't! :D
Haha, a little pee-pee slid out the 'ol *ahem* lol. Well then, I guess my poem breaks the record for 'most peed reactions' - population ONE! lol,
All seriousness aside.
It was meant to make you laugh.
I'm glad it served its purpose. :)