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    So yesterday was Sunday. And I had a blast.
    I went for a jog, didn't go very fast.
    My sneakers got stuck to some tar on the road.
    Why the F#^% is there tar on the side of the road??!

    Today went by quick. I forgot what I did.
    I only remember the money I hid
    in the back of my jeans, during lunch at my school..
    Some kid came behind me and stole it; how cruel.

    Tomorrow should be better, c'mon give me a break.
    Last week so crappy, and this week's been an ache.
    I can only imagine the troubles ahead,
    more money stolen.. diseases might spread.

    Alas, Wednesday comes! A day I enjoy.
    LOL, I sound like Dr.Seuess..only, I'm that little boy.
    Who all he can do is just sit sit sit sit!
    On a day that is rainy, while picking his zit.

    Ew, Thursday I hate.. It was NOT a good day.
    My mother woke up on the wrong side of the bay.
    Yes, I meant to say BAY and not bed, you baboon.
    I'm going for dramatics. I'm talking monsoon.

    Today I threw up, food poisoning's no good.
    Especially when you grew up in the hood.
    GOD, I've hated these days.. I can only pray.
    That this week will end soon.. HOLY SHIT! It's Friday!!

    YES! Saturday's here. No more need to fear.
    I get to see her. Hehe, I shall go buy some beer.
    Only I can't drink any, I'm only in fifth grade.
    Damn it, then when the hell am I going to get laid?!

    Oh Look, Sunday has come - What a freaking surprise.
    The week's gone by fast, Something I shouldn't despise.
    But why should I rejoice, when it'll happen again?
    It will all lead to her.. without us in a bed.

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    Re: No Luck

    Ha ha ha... what a gasp! Very creative! This is the best poem I've seen on here in a long time. Quite a breath of fresh air too. At the very least... I can say this was inspiring. The most I can say is.... I peed a little during my read of it.
    ... Not Ever Again...

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    Re: No Luck

    WOW Peach!! Very glad you enjoyed it!! And I'm very impressed you found it refreshing and new I love the way you critic the poems here, and I was sort of lingering, hoping you wouldn't skip any of mine.. and you didn't!

    Haha, a little pee-pee slid out the 'ol *ahem* lol. Well then, I guess my poem breaks the record for 'most peed reactions' - population ONE! lol,

    All seriousness aside.
    It was meant to make you laugh.
    I'm glad it served its purpose.

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