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Reply With Quoteu r one sweet guy, Blade. ^^
I like this one very much
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Beautiful *dabs eyes with tissue* XDReminding me that there's someone waiting for me,
Someone I feel that I'll end up with,
And grow old with you.
No matter what you say,
Even if you're different physically from everyone,
Even if the colour of your skin is not common,
It doesn't matter to me cause I fell in love with you,
The person inside and your mind.
I feel my heart has been given to you,
As you have given yours to me to cherish.
No matter what you say,
Even you wanted me to live a happier life without you,
I can't do that cause i'm happy being with you,
I love the way that you seem so strong at times,
But letting me protect and comfort you when you feel weak,
I keep the image of your beautiful face in my heart,
Cause that keeps me going,
Reminding me that there's someone waiting for me,
Someone I feel that I'll end up with,
And grow old with you.
No matter what you say,
My heart can never change what it feels about you,
I've got you on my mind all the time,
Even when i'm studying and just walking down the street,
I want to be with you walking with you,
Holding you in my arms,
Feeling our bodies close together,
As the world passes us by,
No matter what you say,
I will love and care for you, always.
This one is for Jasmine. Hun i love you so much. Enjoy everyone.
Thanks for the siggy Ky-lyrra
u r one sweet guy, Blade. ^^
I like this one very much
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Beautiful *dabs eyes with tissue* XDReminding me that there's someone waiting for me,
Someone I feel that I'll end up with,
And grow old with you.
aw-- blade-san. this is beautiful!
lovey dovey romantic~~~
Jamine is pretty lucky to have you to dedicate poems like this!
Great expressions!
keep it up poet-boy!
^_^
i need to leave-- all the romance... is making me puke. why cant sheep has a system call love in it's soul...? >.<
*coughs coughs* the sweetness and strong love in this poem is choking the anti-love sheep.
blade-san--- your poem has become a weapon againts sheep.. T_T
just kidding!! wakakakaka~
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oh very funny aya-kun.....but thanks u guys...i jus needed to express wut i feel for her.....n this was the best way
Thanks for the siggy Ky-lyrra
lol that was very sweet i wish i be poetic like u i'm sure she'll eat it up nice goin blade
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Awww it is sweet! ^^
I liked the way it flowed, even though it dosn't rhyme. Also, how you kept repeating about your heart really emphasized the love! hehe
That is the sweetest part!! Aww!I feel my heart has been given to you,
As you have given yours to me to cherish.
TY Sasurai for the lovely sig!*
Nice poem. I like it. Its a great love like poem. Keep up the work!
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*falls out of chair laughing* I mean! *gets back up* Tear jerker man. Tear jerker. I love it when your in love. I love how your writing changes, but this one ha done you well I can see. ^-^ Goodluck mate!
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