No Matter What (this is for you Jasmine) - Page 2

*Blade X* · Jun 30, 2006, 02:31 PM

thanks guys for supporting my work i mean it

Moon Doggy · Jun 30, 2006, 02:38 PM

GIYA!!!! totaly WOW.....speachless....good....verry.....no more words.....ummm...ok then nice job i love your poems!!!!!!!!!!!! :}

Sazzy · Jun 30, 2006, 03:11 PM

GREAT POEM BLADE!!!! i love everyword you wrote!!!

's so it was so beautiful!!

And i can agree with you with most of it!!

sora the king of dreams · Jul 01, 2006, 01:11 PM

*pokes BladeX head*

who knew that you were in love hahaha, but that was a really touching poem hahahahaha.

Nympho · Jul 01, 2006, 02:29 PM

That was really good after the beginning. In the first paragraph i felt like you were holding back. Like you were trying not to offend anyone.

No matter what you say,
Even if you're different physically from everyone,
Even if the colour of your skin is not common,
It doesn't matter to me cause I fell in love with you,
The person inside and your mind.
I feel my heart has been given to you,
As you have given yours to me to cherish.

I think that part should be written how you wanted it to be.

After that you let go and said pretty much that you wanted to scream out to the world how much you loved her. I like that feeling. And am glad you found someone like that. Movie that makes me feel like this poem "Crazy/beautiful" watch it.

All in all, great work Blade.

*Joe Mage* · Jul 01, 2006, 02:39 PM

Interestingly, this was how I felt 'bout someone a little while ago, thx man. Nice

raja_psyche · Jul 01, 2006, 03:40 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Blade X

No matter what you say,
Even you wanted me to live a happier life without you,
I can't do that cause i'm happy being with you,

it is the first time i read you poem, i find it really nice *gives a sack of cookies*. a product of a dedicated soul, mind and heart!!! makes me shed a little tear *wipes left eye with tissue*. NIce!!!

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Nympho Upcoming Legend Join Date: Mar 2006 Location: I get bored easily Posts: 511 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 701	Re: No Matter What (this is for you Jasmine) That was really good after the beginning. In the first paragraph i felt like you were holding back. Like you were trying not to offend anyone. No matter what you say, Even if you're different physically from everyone, Even if the colour of your skin is not common, It doesn't matter to me cause I fell in love with you, The person inside and your mind. I feel my heart has been given to you, As you have given yours to me to cherish. I think that part should be written how you wanted it to be. After that you let go and said pretty much that you wanted to scream out to the world how much you loved her. I like that feeling. And am glad you found someone like that. Movie that makes me feel like this poem "Crazy/beautiful" watch it. All in all, great work Blade. __________________ I'm a glass child. I am Hannah's regrets. Monster. Last edited by Nympho; Jul 01, 2006 at 02:37 PM.
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