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    Re: No Matter What (this is for you Jasmine)

    nice one blade. touching, really.

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    Re: No Matter What (this is for you Jasmine)

    Quote Originally Posted by Mr. K
    *falls out of chair laughing* I mean! *gets back up* Tear jerker man. Tear jerker. I love it when your in love. I love how your writing changes, but this one ha done you well I can see. ^-^ Goodluck mate!
    ..............O_O wow, that was uncalled for.

    This was a very touching poem, Blade, sincere, yet inspiring. To whom is this Jasmine?
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    Re: No Matter What (this is for you Jasmine)

    This poem MOST definitely deserves a lot of praising words!!

    Dude, this poem is super awesome!!! All the love your poured into it can easily be perceived from start to finish! I can say, without a ghost of a doubt, that both of you are truly feeling great love for each other. That is plain amazing!!! In my opinion, with all honesty, I call this true love, my friend, because you both love each other for you are, not for anything external. ^_^

    Keep up the great work!!! I love it!
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    Re: No Matter What (this is for you Jasmine)

    thanks guys for supporting my work i mean it
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    Re: No Matter What (this is for you Jasmine)

    GIYA!!!! totaly WOW.....speachless....good....verry.....no more words.....ummm...ok then nice job i love your poems!!!!!!!!!!!! :}
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    Re: No Matter What (this is for you Jasmine)

    GREAT POEM BLADE!!!! i love everyword you wrote!!! 's so it was so beautiful!!

    And i can agree with you with most of it!!
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    Re: No Matter What (this is for you Jasmine)

    *pokes BladeX head*

    who knew that you were in love hahaha, but that was a really touching poem hahahahaha.

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    Re: No Matter What (this is for you Jasmine)

    That was really good after the beginning. In the first paragraph i felt like you were holding back. Like you were trying not to offend anyone.

    No matter what you say,
    Even if you're different physically from everyone,
    Even if the colour of your skin is not common,
    It doesn't matter to me cause I fell in love with you,
    The person inside and your mind.
    I feel my heart has been given to you,
    As you have given yours to me to cherish.


    I think that part should be written how you wanted it to be.

    After that you let go and said pretty much that you wanted to scream out to the world how much you loved her. I like that feeling. And am glad you found someone like that. Movie that makes me feel like this poem "Crazy/beautiful" watch it.


    All in all, great work Blade.
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