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Reply With Quote..............O_O wow, that was uncalled for.Originally Posted by Mr. K
This was a very touching poem, Blade, sincere, yet inspiring.To whom is this Jasmine?
nice one blade. touching, really.
..............O_O wow, that was uncalled for.
This was a very touching poem, Blade, sincere, yet inspiring.
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This poem MOST definitely deserves a lot of praising words!!
Dude, this poem is super awesome!!! All the love your poured into it can easily be perceived from start to finish! I can say, without a ghost of a doubt, that both of you are truly feeling great love for each other. That is plain amazing!!! In my opinion, with all honesty, I call this true love, my friend, because you both love each other for you are, not for anything external. ^_^
Keep up the great work!!! I love it!
Last edited by kedar; Jun 30, 2006 at 01:35 PM.
thanks guys for supporting my work i mean it
Last edited by Blade X; Jun 30, 2006 at 02:14 PM.
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GIYA!!!! totaly WOW.....speachless....good....verry.....no more words.....ummm...ok then nice job i love your poems!!!!!!!!!!!! :}
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GREAT POEM BLADE!!!! i love everyword you wrote!!!'s so it was so beautiful!!
And i can agree with you with most of it!!
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who knew that you were in love hahaha, but that was a really touching poem hahahahaha.
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That was really good after the beginning. In the first paragraph i felt like you were holding back. Like you were trying not to offend anyone.
No matter what you say,
Even if you're different physically from everyone,
Even if the colour of your skin is not common,
It doesn't matter to me cause I fell in love with you,
The person inside and your mind.
I feel my heart has been given to you,
As you have given yours to me to cherish.
I think that part should be written how you wanted it to be.
After that you let go and said pretty much that you wanted to scream out to the world how much you loved her. I like that feeling. And am glad you found someone like that. Movie that makes me feel like this poem "Crazy/beautiful" watch it.
All in all, great work Blade.
Last edited by Nympho; Jul 01, 2006 at 01:37 PM.
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