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    *no meaning*

    My life is a lie,
    So I must simply die.

    With no meaning to live,
    With no love to give.

    With a black heart,
    No red not even a little to see.

    My body is scared,
    with cuts self made.
    The blade is beside me on the ground.

    Screaming in my head,
    I wish they would shut up.

    My soul is laying on the ground,
    Motionless in pain.

    I stare into its eyes,
    Its eyes are crying in pain.

    I will leave it there,
    And walk away.

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    Re: *no meaning*

    good poem i liked the bit a the start it made more sence than the bit at the end because the rhyms started to fade but good poem is that really how you feel ? if so i feel sorry for you

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    Re: *no meaning*

    Hmm... i gotta say i like this part

    My soul is laying on the ground,
    Motionless in pain.

    I stare into its eyes,
    Its eyes are crying in pain.

    I will leave it there,
    And walk away.
    very creative this 1...it as if it means u left ur self behind... nicely done.. ^^

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    Re: *no meaning*

    aww that poem is sooo emotional and sad i wish i can help u but i hope this isnt how u really feel but really such a cool poem

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    Wow,

    I can really relate to this poem,

    This is really nicely done. It's also very depressing though , I was also like this but when I realised that I was being loved by so many people, I stopped that thought and was sort of happy again.


    I hope you'll get out of your misery like I did IF you're really talking about yourself in this poem that is.

    Love to hear more,



    -Zainab

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    Re: *no meaning*

    glad you guys enjoyed my poem.
    and I'm writing more
    I'm not sure to post them or just let them
    blow in the wind.

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