No Mercy

!The White Wolf · Mar 26, 2007, 09:33 PM

What is it that I do oh so wrong?
I try to help, make things better.. yet you show no mercy.

Dammit. Why does this always happen to me?
I'm always trying to better some things.. help out. And nothing changes. I am to blame. I am at fault.

Thanks.
Because of you I have taught myself not to be so trusting.
Because of you I am no longer going to be so nice.
Because of you I have taught myself to be tougher.

Thanks. For showing no mercy.

I was just really pissed off when I wrote this. Which is now. Thanks.

*Ky-lyrra* · Mar 26, 2007, 09:36 PM

Remember Wolf-chan I am here for you and it is ok. I'm sorry that you are mad and this is a good poem to write when you are mad. It turned out really well. I think that you would need someone to talk to and there are many people here waiting to listen me for instance.

!The White Wolf · Mar 26, 2007, 09:38 PM

Thank you for being here, ky-chan it means a lot sis. I am glad it turned out well, and not just words written down by pure anger.

*Ky-lyrra* · Mar 26, 2007, 09:39 PM

Well sissy you can always pm me about what makes you mad about the site. I am always here to listen. Great poem by the way and keep up your work I love reading yours they are just so emotional or full of expression.

*RayMe* · Mar 27, 2007, 02:43 PM

@.@ this is first time i saw u pissed off... sheesh.. @.@

Nice poem though~!

!The White Wolf · Mar 27, 2007, 02:47 PM

Lol ray-kun. Well, there is a first time at everything. The poem was the only way I saw to express what I was feeling at that moment. Thanks for the comment.

*Kasai* · Mar 27, 2007, 02:52 PM

I like the stanza, it has a nice use of repetition.

*RayMe* · Mar 27, 2007, 02:53 PM

Sure anything whitey ^^ u are hold on.. Doitashimashite,...^^ it means u are welcomed..

just relax and cool urself down eh... ^^ getting angry would only make u get old faster

!The White Wolf · Mar 27, 2007, 02:55 PM

Thank you kasai. I'm glad the poem came out with actual style and a type of scheme. I was really not intending the poem to be great or anything.. I was just letting out what I feel. But then again.. that is what all poems are. The release of inner emotions and feelings. Thanks, Kasai for the comment.

@Ray: I am not angry anymore. But thanks for the advice.

Mar 26, 2007, 09:33 PM	#1 (permalink)
!The White Wolf Why so serious? Join Date: Feb 2007 Posts: 2,580 Thanks: 9 Thanked 12 Times in 11 Posts Credits: 10,073	No Mercy What is it that I do oh so wrong? I try to help, make things better.. yet you show no mercy. Dammit. Why does this always happen to me? I'm always trying to better some things.. help out. And nothing changes. I am to blame. I am at fault. Thanks. Because of you I have taught myself not to be so trusting. Because of you I am no longer going to be so nice. Because of you I have taught myself to be tougher. Thanks. For showing no mercy. I was just really pissed off when I wrote this. Which is now. Thanks.
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Mar 26, 2007, 09:36 PM	#2 (permalink)
Ky-lyrra Lost In My Own World Join Date: Jan 2007 Location: Fruityville, Florida Posts: 1,531 Thanks: 4 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post Credits: 5,059	Re: No Mercy Remember Wolf-chan I am here for you and it is ok. I'm sorry that you are mad and this is a good poem to write when you are mad. It turned out really well. I think that you would need someone to talk to and there are many people here waiting to listen me for instance. __________________ ™Soon To Be Mother™ Thanks For The Tag Aiora!
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Mar 26, 2007, 09:38 PM	#3 (permalink)
!The White Wolf Why so serious? Join Date: Feb 2007 Posts: 2,580 Thanks: 9 Thanked 12 Times in 11 Posts Credits: 10,073	Re: No Mercy Thank you for being here, ky-chan it means a lot sis. I am glad it turned out well, and not just words written down by pure anger. Last edited by The White Wolf; Mar 27, 2007 at 02:48 PM.
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Mar 26, 2007, 09:39 PM	#4 (permalink)
Ky-lyrra Lost In My Own World Join Date: Jan 2007 Location: Fruityville, Florida Posts: 1,531 Thanks: 4 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post Credits: 5,059	Re: No Mercy Well sissy you can always pm me about what makes you mad about the site. I am always here to listen. Great poem by the way and keep up your work I love reading yours they are just so emotional or full of expression. __________________ ™Soon To Be Mother™ Thanks For The Tag Aiora!
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Mar 27, 2007, 02:43 PM	#5 (permalink)
RayMe 1 )3^^( )N Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: Somewhere i would love to leave right now for somewhere better... Posts: 3,601 Thanks: 54 Thanked 26 Times in 23 Posts Credits: 59,118	Re: No Mercy @.@ this is first time i saw u pissed off... sheesh.. @.@ Nice poem though~! __________________ Legion Ketsueki Lives on~!! The best ever Lasura~! >>>myspace<<<
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Mar 27, 2007, 02:47 PM	#6 (permalink)
!The White Wolf Why so serious? Join Date: Feb 2007 Posts: 2,580 Thanks: 9 Thanked 12 Times in 11 Posts Credits: 10,073	Re: No Mercy Lol ray-kun. Well, there is a first time at everything. The poem was the only way I saw to express what I was feeling at that moment. Thanks for the comment.
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Mar 27, 2007, 02:52 PM	#7 (permalink)
Kasai Domme Join Date: Nov 2004 Location: Florida Posts: 2,745 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 1,490	Re: No Mercy I like the stanza, it has a nice use of repetition. __________________ Seduced by Flesh
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Mar 27, 2007, 02:53 PM	#8 (permalink)
RayMe 1 )3^^( )N Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: Somewhere i would love to leave right now for somewhere better... Posts: 3,601 Thanks: 54 Thanked 26 Times in 23 Posts Credits: 59,118	Re: No Mercy Sure anything whitey ^^ u are hold on.. Doitashimashite,...^^ it means u are welcomed.. just relax and cool urself down eh... ^^ getting angry would only make u get old faster __________________ Legion Ketsueki Lives on~!! The best ever Lasura~! >>>myspace<<<
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Mar 27, 2007, 02:55 PM	#9 (permalink)
!The White Wolf Why so serious? Join Date: Feb 2007 Posts: 2,580 Thanks: 9 Thanked 12 Times in 11 Posts Credits: 10,073	Re: No Mercy Thank you kasai. I'm glad the poem came out with actual style and a type of scheme. I was really not intending the poem to be great or anything.. I was just letting out what I feel. But then again.. that is what all poems are. The release of inner emotions and feelings. Thanks, Kasai for the comment. @Ray: I am not angry anymore. But thanks for the advice.
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