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![]() ![]() Credits: 5,581 | No More happiness Tear stained pillows and empty beds that's the way it always ends , murmured things said in hate and despite never will the emptiness go away. The rose once fresh and new , is now withered and dieing no hope of a better tomorrow as the bed is slowly emptied when the there feet hit the floor hating how the day will start. Pictures shattered , glass cuts there feet as they walk from the bedroom as memories flood there mind making them see shadows on the wall from a past that was not so far away. The minds eye seems so evil in its intent as a shallow sigh and light breath feel the house followed by echo's that should have never been made to begin with, Tea is poured as the the empty spot beside them is no longer filled with a warm hug or kiss to the cheek. they sit at the table with there head leaned back in the chair as they picture kisses on there neck by a fire while being held in another's arm's , drowning themselves in sorrow they let hate replace the love . Ahead on the table as tears fall once more pictures of a hand from behind holding them , warm kisses on the neck and warn breath caressing the skin its all gone now.
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![]() Credits: 158 | Re: No More happiness you know... i like the poem. I love it.^^.. i have observed that your poems are all sad and mysterious.... why??... is that your personality,, or anything.. your experience in life??... its always sad!! |
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![]() Credits: 11,584 | Re: No More happiness i love the poem good work alot of emotions shown through out the poemvery good ^^ keep it ↑ ♥~*The Princess*~♥
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![]() ![]() Credits: 2,616 | Re: No More happiness It sounds like good love gone bad. It seems after a long time of being together they lost interest in eachother and all they have left are passing glances at the dinner table. It's really sad when two people sho shared so much for so long lets everything slip right through their fingers. Good job.
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![]() ![]() Credits: 59,502 | Re: No More happiness eeek... :/ now thats very sad man... another nicely done masterpiece with good imaginations... nice~! good job ^^ *ps: i almost cried.. xD* |
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