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    No More happiness

    Tear stained pillows and empty beds
    that's the way it always ends , murmured
    things said in hate and despite never will the
    emptiness go away.

    The rose once fresh and new , is now
    withered and dieing no hope of a better
    tomorrow as the bed is slowly emptied
    when the there feet hit the floor hating how the
    day will start.

    Pictures shattered , glass cuts there feet
    as they walk from the bedroom as memories
    flood there mind making them see shadows
    on the wall from a past that was not so far away.


    The minds eye seems so evil in its intent as
    a shallow sigh and light breath feel the house followed
    by echo's that should have never been made to begin with,
    Tea is poured as the the empty spot beside them is no longer
    filled with a warm hug or kiss to the cheek.

    they sit at the table with there head leaned back in the chair
    as they picture kisses on there neck by a fire while being
    held in another's arm's , drowning themselves in sorrow
    they let hate replace the love .

    Ahead on the table as tears fall once more
    pictures of a hand from behind holding them ,
    warm kisses on the neck and warn breath caressing the skin
    its all gone now.
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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    Re: No More happiness

    you know... i like the poem. I love it.^^.. i have observed that your poems are all sad and mysterious.... why??... is that your personality,, or anything.. your experience in life??... its always sad!!

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    Re: No More happiness

    i love the poem good work alot of emotions shown through out the poem
    very good ^^ keep it ↑ ♥~*The Princess*~♥
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    Re: No More happiness

    It sounds like good love gone bad. It seems after a long time of being together they lost interest in eachother and all they have left are passing glances at the dinner table. It's really sad when two people sho shared so much for so long lets everything slip right through their fingers. Good job.
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    Re: No More happiness

    eeek... :/ now thats very sad man... another nicely done masterpiece with good imaginations... nice~! good job ^^

    *ps: i almost cried.. xD*

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