No more hiding...<viewers discretion>

I'm not going to hide them,
I'm not going to cry,
I have to face the facts,
Or I could easily die.

No one knows,
About the pain I cause to myself,
It's causing problems,
And straining my mental health.

I tried to tell someone,
But couldn't find the words,
I wanted no one to listen,
Not wanting to be heard.

There's so many people,
That I know would care,
But I don't want them to worry,
It just isn't fair.

But now I lay on the floor,
Not knowing what to do,
I've realized while I bleed,
That I really need you.

But I just couldn't tell you,
I worried it would hurt what we had,
I never could've known though,
That it would turn out so bad.

So now I must admit,
I'm full of doubt,
That I could ever escape this lifestyle,
But please, help me get out.

I need some help,
I never knew this would end up in a rut,
I'm sorry I never told you.
But yes, I do cut.

< Comments, critisizm>

feeling like u cant tell anyone.....feeling the weight on ur shoulders, u feel like ur break at any moment.......u resorted to the final thing.........finding rest in death......atleast u made use of stanzas lol well it's another good poem...keep it up

Hmmn. I really like this one.
Keep it up. :thumb:

HEY GUY!!!! wow that was especily deep...did i spell esecily rite? no i did not but...anyways...ya wow that is good...who is it to? so judging (i didn't spell that rite eather) man i can't spell.....ok well get back to me on that!!!!!

BYE GUY!!!!!

It's a very deep. keep it up!:thumb:

wow the was really impressive

great job keep it up^_^

great poem!!!!!!!!!!:2thumbs: :thumb: :2thumbs: :thumb:

I guess you can't tell your true feelings for someone..... But it's a nice poem to show it.....