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May 29, 2006, 09:10 AM
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 Diamond in the Rough  Join Date: May 2006 Location: Between the reaches of ones heart, mind and soul...where only a small light lingers.
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 Credits: 770 |  No more hiding...<viewers discretion> I'm not going to hide them, I'm not going to cry, I have to face the facts, Or I could easily die. No one knows, About the pain I cause to myself, It's causing problems, And straining my mental health. I tried to tell someone, But couldn't find the words, I wanted no one to listen, Not wanting to be heard. There's so many people, That I know would care, But I don't want them to worry, It just isn't fair. But now I lay on the floor, Not knowing what to do, I've realized while I bleed, That I really need you. But I just couldn't tell you, I worried it would hurt what we had, I never could've known though, That it would turn out so bad. So now I must admit, I'm full of doubt, That I could ever escape this lifestyle, But please, help me get out. I need some help, I never knew this would end up in a rut, I'm sorry I never told you. But yes, I do cut. < Comments, critisizm>
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May 29, 2006, 09:31 AM
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  AO's Demon Slayer  Join Date: Jul 2005 Location: Protecting my loved one.
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Credits: 1,446 | Re: No more hiding...<viewers discretion> feeling like u cant tell anyone.....feeling the weight on ur shoulders, u feel like ur break at any moment.......u resorted to the final thing.........finding rest in death......atleast u made use of stanzas lol well it's another good poem...keep it up
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May 29, 2006, 09:44 AM
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| Demon Loving Only Himself  Join Date: May 2006 Location: I dislike stalkers.
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Credits: 1,006 | Re: No more hiding...<viewers discretion> Hmmn. I really like this one. Keep it up. 
__________________ You are not your job. You are not your bank account. You are not the contents of your wallet. You are not your ****ing Khakis. We are the all seeing all dancing crap of the world. You are not a beautiful and unique snowflake you are the same rotting organic matter as everything else. We are all part of the same compost heap. |
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May 29, 2006, 10:03 AM
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| Newbie  Join Date: May 2006 Location: In ur head
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Credits: 331 | Re: No more hiding...<viewers discretion> HEY GUY!!!! wow that was especily deep...did i spell esecily rite? no i did not but...anyways...ya wow that is good...who is it to? so judging (i didn't spell that rite eather) man i can't spell.....ok well get back to me on that!!!!! BYE GUY!!!!! |
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May 29, 2006, 10:07 AM
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| Diamond in the Rough  Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: Now Currently Collecting Fire Quells
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Credits: 358 | Re: No more hiding...<viewers discretion> It's a very deep. keep it up!
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May 29, 2006, 11:09 AM
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| Newbie  Join Date: Sep 2005 Location: I live by a cherry blossem tree
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Credits: 210 | Re: No more hiding...<viewers discretion> wow the was really impressive great job keep it up^_^
__________________  I live to protect my love one, but where ever I go they would call me there Master. http://video.freevideoblog.com/searc...764D415F16.htm http://video.freevideoblog.com/searc...60302F397A.htm http://video.freevideoblog.com/searc...3F6AB74759.htm |
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Jun 03, 2006, 01:00 AM
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 Mercenary  Join Date: Jan 2006 Location: War zones around the globe...
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Credits: 901 | Re: No more hiding...<viewers discretion> I guess you can't tell your true feelings for someone..... But it's a nice poem to show it.....
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Jun 03, 2006, 01:04 AM
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| Diamond in the Rough  Join Date: Sep 2005 Location: I live in a Place where I'am Truly Happy and that would be with All My Friends
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Credits: 458 | Re: No more hiding...<viewers discretion> WOW that was really cool keep it up 
__________________  I live in the shadows and I am as fast as the speed of light, but I use my ability's to help people even though they fear me for who I am. A Brand new Theme song for all my friends who use to come to Ao and the People that still come's to Ao. http://video.freevideoblog.com/hotte...7631ca1c2a.htm |
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