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    Unhappy No more hiding...<viewers discretion>

    I'm not going to hide them,
    I'm not going to cry,
    I have to face the facts,
    Or I could easily die.

    No one knows,
    About the pain I cause to myself,
    It's causing problems,
    And straining my mental health.

    I tried to tell someone,
    But couldn't find the words,
    I wanted no one to listen,
    Not wanting to be heard.

    There's so many people,
    That I know would care,
    But I don't want them to worry,
    It just isn't fair.

    But now I lay on the floor,
    Not knowing what to do,
    I've realized while I bleed,
    That I really need you.

    But I just couldn't tell you,
    I worried it would hurt what we had,
    I never could've known though,
    That it would turn out so bad.

    So now I must admit,
    I'm full of doubt,
    That I could ever escape this lifestyle,
    But please, help me get out.

    I need some help,
    I never knew this would end up in a rut,
    I'm sorry I never told you.
    But yes, I do cut.


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    Re: No more hiding...<viewers discretion>

    feeling like u cant tell anyone.....feeling the weight on ur shoulders, u feel like ur break at any moment.......u resorted to the final thing.........finding rest in death......atleast u made use of stanzas lol well it's another good poem...keep it up

    Thanks for the siggy Ky-lyrra

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    Re: No more hiding...<viewers discretion>

    Hmmn. I really like this one.
    Keep it up.
    You are not your job. You are not your bank account. You are not the contents of your wallet. You are not your ****ing Khakis. We are the all seeing all dancing crap of the world. You are not a beautiful and unique snowflake you are the same rotting organic matter as everything else. We are all part of the same compost heap.

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    Re: No more hiding...<viewers discretion>

    HEY GUY!!!! wow that was especily deep...did i spell esecily rite? no i did not but...anyways...ya wow that is good...who is it to? so judging (i didn't spell that rite eather) man i can't spell.....ok well get back to me on that!!!!!

    BYE GUY!!!!!

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    Re: No more hiding...<viewers discretion>

    It's a very deep. keep it up!

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    Re: No more hiding...<viewers discretion>

    wow the was really impressive

    great job keep it up^_^

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    Re: No more hiding...<viewers discretion>

    great poem!!!!!!!!!!

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    Re: No more hiding...<viewers discretion>

    I guess you can't tell your true feelings for someone..... But it's a nice poem to show it.....

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