Hmmm verrryyyy interesting ^_^ I love your works and nice use of emotions, keep it up!![]()
No More Tears
Cloudness nights
The stars sparkle
The moon rays down
One that cries
One with pain
Its seems never enough
One that hurts
One that pleads
One that wish
No more tears
No more crying
Don't let go of hope
One who can't help but cry
One who wants to let go
One who wish to end
Loneliness brought it
Hatred rose
Forgiveness not accepted
One say No More Tears
But one can't help but cry
Pain is what one has
Hmmm verrryyyy interesting ^_^ I love your works and nice use of emotions, keep it up!![]()
heh
when evryone sadness just go away that would be great
its a great poem and it gives a great message of no more pain or sadness.![]()
perdoname michelle!
*stares in awe*......Way 2 go Hiei!!I soo loved this poem as well!
The way that you showed the emotions in this poem was awesome!
Another awesome job Hiei!
Can't wait 2 see what you come up with next.
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Made by- Ryomakurosaki (Thank you sooooo much!!) ^__^
thank you. I'm glad you guys like it.
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