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    No More Tears

    No More Tears

    Cloudness nights
    The stars sparkle
    The moon rays down

    One that cries
    One with pain
    Its seems never enough

    One that hurts
    One that pleads
    One that wish

    No more tears
    No more crying
    Don't let go of hope

    One who can't help but cry
    One who wants to let go
    One who wish to end

    Loneliness brought it
    Hatred rose
    Forgiveness not accepted

    One say No More Tears
    But one can't help but cry
    Pain is what one has

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    Re: No More Tears

    Hmmm verrryyyy interesting ^_^ I love your works and nice use of emotions, keep it up!

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    Re: No More Tears

    heh
    when evryone sadness just go away that would be great
    its a great poem and it gives a great message of no more pain or sadness.



    perdoname michelle!

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    Re: No More Tears

    *stares in awe*......Way 2 go Hiei!! I soo loved this poem as well! The way that you showed the emotions in this poem was awesome! Another awesome job Hiei! Can't wait 2 see what you come up with next.
    Made by- Ryomakurosaki (Thank you sooooo much!!) ^__^

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    Re: No More Tears

    thank you. I'm glad you guys like it.
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