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Sep 19, 2006, 11:00 AM
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  Getting Married 3-14-09  Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: at home doing wedding planning
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 Credits: 3,156 | No More Tears No More Tears Cloudness nights The stars sparkle The moon rays down One that cries One with pain Its seems never enough One that hurts One that pleads One that wish No more tears No more crying Don't let go of hope One who can't help but cry One who wants to let go One who wish to end Loneliness brought it Hatred rose Forgiveness not accepted One say No More Tears But one can't help but cry Pain is what one has |
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Sep 19, 2006, 03:38 PM
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 I hate idiots on AO. Kill  Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: Life is an illusion.
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Credits: 16,710 | Re: No More Tears Hmmm verrryyyy interesting ^_^ I love your works and nice use of emotions, keep it up!  |
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Sep 19, 2006, 08:08 PM
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| S.E.L - sexy etna lover  Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: Mayaguez
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Credits: 409 | Re: No More Tears heh when evryone sadness just go away that would be great its a great poem and it gives a great message of no more pain or sadness. 
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Sep 19, 2006, 08:36 PM
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| In The Arms Of My Lover  Join Date: Mar 2006 Location: In Axel's Closet!! *watch's him sleep* XD
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Credits: 3,813 | Re: No More Tears *stares in awe*......Way 2 go Hiei!! I soo loved this poem as well! The way that you showed the emotions in this poem was awesome! Another awesome job Hiei! Can't wait 2 see what you come up with next.
__________________  Made by- Ryomakurosaki (Thank you sooooo much!!) ^__^ |
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Sep 20, 2006, 07:59 PM
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| Getting Married 3-14-09 Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: at home doing wedding planning
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Credits: 3,156 | Re: No More Tears thank you. I'm glad you guys like it.
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