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Nov 01, 2007, 03:19 PM
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 Credits: 49,619 | "No one loves me" Friends turn their back on you... Friends forget your name and don’t talk to you... There’s no way you can stop thinking: „No one loves me...” Cold shivers run down your spine, Tears slowly gather in your eyes... There’s no one to cuddle up to and you think: „No one loves me...” It takes all the strength out of you... This hate and fear… You can never hide from it… And you can’t help thinking: “No one cares…” You think of giving in, You feel there’s no use of trying… You’re afraid all is lost… Well I must say you’re just acting silly- You worry too much of what others think. |
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Nov 01, 2007, 05:07 PM
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| Bio-Engineered Human Race  Join Date: Jan 2007 Location: In a Purified Realm Of Lightness
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Credits: 25,127 | Re: "No one loves me" A really interesting poem you have here Lasura and is really impressive though "friends turn your back on you" is really painful but i really liked the poem and i wish to see more of your work this really makes an impact towards me and i want more feelings towards it. ^_^
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Nov 01, 2007, 05:13 PM
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| Angelic Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: In a Demon's Arms
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Credits: 49,619 | Re: "No one loves me" Aww... you thought I'm talking about you? No... I didn't... You are my friend, are you? O.o ^^ *giggles* it's about some other things... just one of those witch you write cuz you have too much on you... ^^ I agree... it's interesting... I dislike the ending  Thank You so much for your coment never the less, it means a lot to me... you've always written such nice comments on my poems... |
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Nov 02, 2007, 01:15 AM
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Credits: 59,502 | Re: "No one loves me" a nice style... the repitition makes the poem strong... a very good poem indeed ^^ and no..there is someone loving you..   |
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Nov 02, 2007, 03:35 AM
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Credits: 49,619 | Re: "No one loves me" Thank you Tifa and Thank Yo Ray ^^ I'm rally thankful for your comments! ^^ It means a lot to me... I'm glad you liked this poem... It's really quite simple so I'm glad to hear it has something in it after all.. And yea... I know Ray ^^ |
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Nov 02, 2007, 07:37 AM
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Credits: 125,184 | Re: "No one loves me" Everyone faces that one point in their lives where the truly think they are unloved. I really like this poem here, Laura! You did well with your writing skills (as usual) and hit some valid points as well. This poem rocked my socks! ^_^ |
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Nov 02, 2007, 10:30 AM
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| Sugar sweet poison  Join Date: May 2007 Location: Crystal Minnesota.
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Credits: 12,880 | Re: "No one loves me" You know. I feel this way. A lot. And then theres Sprout right there in my face to make sure I KNOW that he loves me and will always be there. Even if everyone else in the world hates me. And while when I'm upset him reminding me makes me lement more. Because endings are so much easier when no one cares about them. I really appriciate his pulling me back from the edge time and time again. Sounds like you do this aswell.
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Nov 02, 2007, 10:41 AM
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| Slippery When Wet~  Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: The wonderfull world of Minnesota! And I mean that!
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Credits: 157,450 | Re: "No one loves me" I LOVE THAT POEM! That is so true, just the other day i felt like that, wanted to bunch my self up in a corner, it is so sad, but i snapped out of it and realized who my true friends are. ^.^ I love your work! Keep up the great job!
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Nov 02, 2007, 02:21 PM
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| Angelic Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: In a Demon's Arms
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Credits: 49,619 | Re: "No one loves me" Awww... Thank You all guys ^^ Your comments really mean a lot to me!!!!!! @ bratling: ahh... so you two are kinda together after all ^^ I'm glad to hear that... And I know how that is... when Ray's around i never feel unloved too... but there are times when he can't be there and, if something happens then... well you saw what happens in the poem @ highteckdudu: *hugs* thank you so much! I'm so glad to hear someone saying that they love my work!!!! And I'm glad you snap out like that... Just thinking usually doesn't help me I need to talk.... |
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Nov 02, 2007, 02:29 PM
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| Sugar sweet poison Join Date: May 2007 Location: Crystal Minnesota.
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Credits: 12,880 | Re: "No one loves me" Actually we're not. But always will be in a way. Because of the friendship relationship that we do have. The boyfriend I have doesn't make me feel as accepted. Which is a sad state of afairs.
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