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    "No one loves me"

    Friends turn their back on you...
    Friends forget your name and don’t talk to you...
    There’s no way you can stop thinking:
    „No one loves me...”

    Cold shivers run down your spine,
    Tears slowly gather in your eyes...
    There’s no one to cuddle up to and you think:
    „No one loves me...”

    It takes all the strength out of you...
    This hate and fear… You can never hide from it…
    And you can’t help thinking:
    “No one cares…”

    You think of giving in,
    You feel there’s no use of trying…
    You’re afraid all is lost…
    Well I must say you’re just acting silly-
    You worry too much of what others think.

    My recommended fanfic: "Dreamer" by Scourge

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    Re: "No one loves me"

    A really interesting poem you have here Lasura and is really impressive though "friends turn your back on you" is really painful but i really liked the poem and i wish to see more of your work this really makes an impact towards me and i want more feelings towards it. ^_^

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    Re: "No one loves me"

    Aww... you thought I'm talking about you? No... I didn't... You are my friend, are you? O.o ^^ *giggles* it's about some other things... just one of those witch you write cuz you have too much on you... ^^

    I agree... it's interesting... I dislike the ending

    Thank You so much for your coment never the less, it means a lot to me... you've always written such nice comments on my poems...

    My recommended fanfic: "Dreamer" by Scourge

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    Re: "No one loves me"

    A really nice poem. It was nicely written and I enjoyed reading it. Keep it up! ^^

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    Re: "No one loves me"

    a nice style... the repitition makes the poem strong... a very good poem indeed ^^

    and no..there is someone loving you..

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    Thank you Tifa and Thank Yo Ray ^^ I'm rally thankful for your comments! ^^ It means a lot to me...

    I'm glad you liked this poem... It's really quite simple so I'm glad to hear it has something in it after all..

    And yea... I know Ray ^^

    My recommended fanfic: "Dreamer" by Scourge

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    Re: "No one loves me"

    Everyone faces that one point in their lives where the truly think they are unloved.

    I really like this poem here, Laura! You did well with your writing skills (as usual) and hit some valid points as well. This poem rocked my socks! ^_^


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    Re: "No one loves me"

    You know. I feel this way. A lot. And then theres Sprout right there in my face to make sure I KNOW that he loves me and will always be there. Even if everyone else in the world hates me. And while when I'm upset him reminding me makes me lement more. Because endings are so much easier when no one cares about them. I really appriciate his pulling me back from the edge time and time again. Sounds like you do this aswell.

    You never really loved me/You never really cared/It was all just a game to boost your ego/Those feelings never really there/ I'm filing emotional bankruptcy/My heart can take no more debt/Theres no more "money" there to spend. === Besides tee hee SHE loves me!

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