Just an empty house
And no one to love
No place to fit
Like a to big glove
People say they know me
And know my thoughts
They say there my friend
But every time I turn around they break my heart
Shippo is determined to become a lvl higherI'm a solider of Pen and Paper!<3 Atomik_Sprout <3
Ahh... You can feel that something has happened... no happy sarcasm in these last three poems I've read today... But still they are all good, I admire the fact that you can put feelings in your poems like this.
I decided to post on this one because it's the one witch I like the most... I understand how you feel... but people are like that, but not all... ^^
My recommended fanfic: "Dreamer" by Scourge
nice...you put rime and everything...i like it a lot
Aww is there more to this poem oh well i liked this one it best describes me that when you go around so many poeple and they just simply break your heart by leaving you there i mostly like this poem this really happens to me rarely without explanation but i truly liked it i wished i can read more to it and i would like to see more in the later on.
Magic intervenes when there is love in first sight.