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    No place to fit

    Left out
    Left alone
    No friends
    No home

    Just an empty house
    And no one to love
    No place to fit
    Like a to big glove

    People say they know me
    And know my thoughts
    They say there my friend
    But every time I turn around they break my heart
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    Re: No place to fit

    Quote Originally Posted by Shippo101 View Post
    Left out
    Left alone
    No friends
    No home

    Just an empty house
    And no one to love
    No place to fit
    Like a to big glove

    People say they know me
    And know my thoughts
    They say there my friend
    But every time I turn around they break my heart
    I know just how you feel. I like the way you write. Simple and charmingly.

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    Re: No place to fit

    Ahh... You can feel that something has happened... no happy sarcasm in these last three poems I've read today... But still they are all good, I admire the fact that you can put feelings in your poems like this.

    I decided to post on this one because it's the one witch I like the most... I understand how you feel... but people are like that, but not all... ^^

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    Re: No place to fit

    nice...you put rime and everything...i like it a lot

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    Re: No place to fit

    Aww is there more to this poem oh well i liked this one it best describes me that when you go around so many poeple and they just simply break your heart by leaving you there i mostly like this poem this really happens to me rarely without explanation but i truly liked it i wished i can read more to it and i would like to see more in the later on.

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