Shippo101

Left out
Left alone
No friends
No home

Just an empty house
And no one to love
No place to fit
Like a to big glove

People say they know me
And know my thoughts
They say there my friend
But every time I turn around they break my heart

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The heavens laugh at our foolish deed and the greed we exceed

bratling

I know just how you feel. I like the way you write. Simple and charmingly.

Lasura

Ahh... You can feel that something has happened... no happy sarcasm in these last three poems I've read today... But still they are all good, I admire the fact that you can put feelings in your poems like this.

I decided to post on this one because it's the one witch I like the most... I understand how you feel... but people are like that, but not all... ^^

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My recommended fanfic: "Dreamer" by Scourge

picoboca

nice...you put rime and everything...i like it a lot

dark1angel

Aww is there more to this poem oh well i liked this one it best describes me that when you go around so many poeple and they just simply break your heart by leaving you there i mostly like this poem this really happens to me rarely without explanation but i truly liked it i wished i can read more to it and i would like to see more in the later on.

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Getting away from conflicts can get you far, but also can get you into more chaos.
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