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Old Jun 08, 2007, 01:00 PM   #1 (permalink)
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No place to fit

Left out
Left alone
No friends
No home

Just an empty house
And no one to love
No place to fit
Like a to big glove

People say they know me
And know my thoughts
They say there my friend
But every time I turn around they break my heart
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Old Jun 08, 2007, 01:37 PM   #2 (permalink)
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Re: No place to fit

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Left out
Left alone
No friends
No home

Just an empty house
And no one to love
No place to fit
Like a to big glove

People say they know me
And know my thoughts
They say there my friend
But every time I turn around they break my heart
I know just how you feel. I like the way you write. Simple and charmingly.
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Old Jun 09, 2007, 06:21 AM   #3 (permalink)
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Re: No place to fit

Ahh... You can feel that something has happened... no happy sarcasm in these last three poems I've read today... But still they are all good, I admire the fact that you can put feelings in your poems like this.

I decided to post on this one because it's the one witch I like the most... I understand how you feel... but people are like that, but not all... ^^
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Old Jun 09, 2007, 08:17 AM   #4 (permalink)
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nice...you put rime and everything...i like it a lot
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Old Jun 09, 2007, 01:33 PM   #5 (permalink)
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Aww is there more to this poem oh well i liked this one it best describes me that when you go around so many poeple and they just simply break your heart by leaving you there i mostly like this poem this really happens to me rarely without explanation but i truly liked it i wished i can read more to it and i would like to see more in the later on.
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