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Reply With QuoteWow, absolutely brilliant. I totally had no idea what the speaker was until I saw the "pinpricks". It's very deep, well layed out.
Because I'm not of this world,
There is no reflection I can see.
I can't see myself;
Or know what you see...
No reflection in your eyes,
As I admire your face.
Or see myself cry,
After I lost you, forever...
No reflection in the mirror,
That you shattered after
You found out that
I wasn't from this world...
No reflection on my coffin
After i have fed
To see the blood dripping
Off my face...
No reflection off the pool of blood
Cause by the two
Pinpricks on her neck
In the darkness of the alley...
Knowing I never see what I've become,
Caused by this horrid curse,
I go off into the night,
To feed once again...
sig made for the SOTW comp. week of march 31.
Wow, absolutely brilliant. I totally had no idea what the speaker was until I saw the "pinpricks". It's very deep, well layed out.
thanks. i wrote it for a poetry assignment in my english class last year...
thanks a lot again...
sig made for the SOTW comp. week of march 31.
well written ^^ i guess tis is kinda flawless coz i cannot really find anything tat aint rite ...nt tat i want togreat job. hope to see more of ur work
thanks elie. flawless you really think so? wow...Originally Posted by elie26
well written ^^ i guess tis is kinda flawless coz i cannot really find anything tat aint rite ...nt tat i want to
well heres another poem i did it on Alucard from hellsing:
"Alucard"
sig made for the SOTW comp. week of march 31.
that is some nice work, i bet you impress some ppl on your english class
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