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Jun 05, 2006, 04:58 PM
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 Diamond in the Rough  Join Date: Mar 2005 Location: California, US
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 Credits: 253 | "No Reflection" Because I'm not of this world, There is no reflection I can see. I can't see myself; Or know what you see... No reflection in your eyes, As I admire your face. Or see myself cry, After I lost you, forever... No reflection in the mirror, That you shattered after You found out that I wasn't from this world... No reflection on my coffin After i have fed To see the blood dripping Off my face... No reflection off the pool of blood Cause by the two Pinpricks on her neck In the darkness of the alley... Knowing I never see what I've become, Caused by this horrid curse, I go off into the night, To feed once again...
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Jun 05, 2006, 05:32 PM
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Credits: 140 | Re: "No Reflection" Wow, absolutely brilliant. I totally had no idea what the speaker was until I saw the "pinpricks". It's very deep, well layed out. |
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Jun 05, 2006, 05:41 PM
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Credits: 253 | Re: "No Reflection" thanks. i wrote it for a poetry assignment in my english class last year... thanks a lot again...
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Jun 05, 2006, 06:20 PM
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Credits: 2,151 | Re: "No Reflection" well written ^^ i guess tis is kinda flawless coz i cannot really find anything tat aint rite ...nt tat i want to great job. hope to see more of ur work 
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Jun 05, 2006, 06:46 PM
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Credits: 253 | Re: "No Reflection" Quote:
well heres another poem i did it on Alucard from hellsing: "Alucard"
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