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    "No Reflection"

    Because I'm not of this world,
    There is no reflection I can see.
    I can't see myself;
    Or know what you see...

    No reflection in your eyes,
    As I admire your face.
    Or see myself cry,
    After I lost you, forever...

    No reflection in the mirror,
    That you shattered after
    You found out that
    I wasn't from this world...

    No reflection on my coffin
    After i have fed
    To see the blood dripping
    Off my face...

    No reflection off the pool of blood
    Cause by the two
    Pinpricks on her neck
    In the darkness of the alley...

    Knowing I never see what I've become,
    Caused by this horrid curse,
    I go off into the night,
    To feed once again...
    sig made for the SOTW comp. week of march 31.

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    Re: "No Reflection"

    Wow, absolutely brilliant. I totally had no idea what the speaker was until I saw the "pinpricks". It's very deep, well layed out.

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    Re: "No Reflection"

    thanks. i wrote it for a poetry assignment in my english class last year...
    thanks a lot again...
    sig made for the SOTW comp. week of march 31.

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    Re: "No Reflection"

    well written ^^ i guess tis is kinda flawless coz i cannot really find anything tat aint rite ...nt tat i want to great job. hope to see more of ur work

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    Quote Originally Posted by elie26
    well written ^^ i guess tis is kinda flawless coz i cannot really find anything tat aint rite ...nt tat i want to great job. hope to see more of ur work
    thanks elie. flawless you really think so? wow...
    well heres another poem i did it on Alucard from hellsing:
    "Alucard"
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    Re: "No Reflection"

    that is some nice work, i bet you impress some ppl on your english class

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