good job, its very well writen
Whoa! Dude, you are getting better in writing poetry with each poem you write. This one is radically awesome! Meaning is conveyed well, and the word choice is suitable/well-picked for the theme of the poem. Great work, Blade! Keep it up, and write some more, bud.
nc poem blade...keep it up...nt in the state of giving comments...zZzzz so juz keep up the gd work..and....*snores*
Ok, Im guna say what I thought Blade, so here goes..........
First of all, when I first looked at it, I thought it was really long and tedious to read. Nothing wrong with that though....... most poems I find really boring.
However, when I read it, it was quite meaningful and menacing at the same time. I really like most of your poems....... it always has to have something to do with righteousness one way or the other...
Most parts are quite repetitive, but the main point was carried all throughout, so its fine.
All in all, its another great work. NIce