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Reply With Quotenice one brother, it looks like you have been doing your homework! keep it up man.
There ain't no sunshine left
you walk around, watching your every step
hoping and praying you don't get checked
yea this is life
avoiding getting robbed, or mobbed
while walking down the street
so you go and get some heat
and its layin in your pocket,
and you can hear your heart beat
and its stil in your pocket
then he comes to you
and you cock it
pop it
die B!tch die!
he won't rob you anymore
in your bed you lay
you don't even snore
you sit there remembering that day
you killed a man
in fear, of getting robbed and shot
but that's life
better you than him right?
and so.....
Ain't much more sunshine
whilel you sittin in the floor wastin away
and dyin
Ain't no sunshine in there its on...
only darkness everyday
ain't no sunshine when its on,
cuz when its on ya'll people wanna be gone
everytime, cuz we don't play.
and in the end
we all die one day
You should stop talking about your dreams, and start making them.
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There is something so human in the desire to never give up, while at the same time, never giving it your all?
nice one brother, it looks like you have been doing your homework! keep it up man.
very nice hun, i like it even more wen you read it over the phone and added emphasis, i wuv ur voice!!
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"As darkness falls, night unfolds ebon wings to wrap the world in its dark embrace"-Joeseph Vargo "Forever longing for an espace, only to get yelled at in my face, People are too complicated, love has become so over-rated, so I'm done and I'm gone"-Laren these are quotes that went through my head while I read your beautifully, well-thought out poem...sorry if I offend you by this comment, by the way
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was this inspired at all by the song "aint no sunshine"? These last few lines remind me of the song.Originally Posted by N.Y._Soulja
... Not Ever Again...
It sounds like a song i have heard before.Using the word sunshine to create a darkness mood is great and it flows well.Keep up the good effort.
It's a song right? Still capitalization would work. Keep it up ^_^
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Jkin, Anyways I really like this piece ^^ Very true words, harsh as it is, fav part was this-
especially the last line, nicely done!Ain't no sunshine in there its on...
only darkness everyday
ain't no sunshine when its on,
cuz when its on ya'll people wanna be gone
everytime, cuz we don't play.
and in the end
we all die one day
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