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Old Oct 19, 2006, 03:34 PM   #1 (permalink)
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this is a poem i had to write for school in some stupid persian style. my teacher thought it was funny, i never told him that i was accually describing myself

My life is like a computer
Where no one can find the muter
and whenever I get too tired
I just use the old rebooter.


lol, tell me what you think. i had to write it in that 1-2-4 style so...
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Old Oct 20, 2006, 03:20 AM   #2 (permalink)
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It actually made since! Wow, I liked it. Good job. A little capitalization would be nice.
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Old Oct 20, 2006, 03:52 AM   #3 (permalink)
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hehehe, i really like that poem, it kinda remind me of some old saying related to that.
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Old Oct 20, 2006, 07:01 AM   #4 (permalink)
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That was good.
It made me laugh a bit.
I haven't seen this style before either I must look into it.
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Old Oct 20, 2006, 07:45 AM   #5 (permalink)
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The poem is pretty good and the fact that you were talking about yourself makes it even better! Especially since you teacher couldn't figure it out! Thanks for sharing it!
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thanx everyone, i'll fix the capitalization problem too.
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