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Reply With QuoteIt actually made since! Wow, I liked it. Good job. A little capitalization would be nice.
this is a poem i had to write for school in some stupid persian style. my teacher thought it was funny, i never told him that i was accually describing myself
My life is like a computer
Where no one can find the muter
and whenever I get too tired
I just use the old rebooter.
lol, tell me what you think. i had to write it in that 1-2-4 style so...
Last edited by fayt lingod; Oct 22, 2006 at 04:30 PM. Reason: sugestion for capitalization
thanks to zyta for the sick sig and avy!
It actually made since! Wow, I liked it. Good job. A little capitalization would be nice.
Seduced by Flesh
hehehe, i really like that poem, it kinda remind me of some old saying related to that.
That was good.
It made me laugh a bit.
I haven't seen this style before either I must look into it.
The poem is pretty good and the fact that you were talking about yourself makes it even better! Especially since you teacher couldn't figure it out! Thanks for sharing it!
thanx everyone, i'll fix the capitalization problem too.
thanks to zyta for the sick sig and avy!
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