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    this is a poem i had to write for school in some stupid persian style. my teacher thought it was funny, i never told him that i was accually describing myself

    My life is like a computer
    Where no one can find the muter
    and whenever I get too tired
    I just use the old rebooter.


    lol, tell me what you think. i had to write it in that 1-2-4 style so...
    Last edited by fayt lingod; Oct 22, 2006 at 04:30 PM. Reason: sugestion for capitalization

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    It actually made since! Wow, I liked it. Good job. A little capitalization would be nice.
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    hehehe, i really like that poem, it kinda remind me of some old saying related to that.

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    That was good.
    It made me laugh a bit.
    I haven't seen this style before either I must look into it.

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    The poem is pretty good and the fact that you were talking about yourself makes it even better! Especially since you teacher couldn't figure it out! Thanks for sharing it!

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    thanx everyone, i'll fix the capitalization problem too.

    thanks to zyta for the sick sig and avy!

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