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*fayt lingod* · Oct 19, 2006, 03:34 PM

this is a poem i had to write for school in some stupid persian style. my teacher thought it was funny, i never told him that i was accually describing myself

My life is like a computer
Where no one can find the muter
and whenever I get too tired
I just use the old rebooter.

lol, tell me what you think. i had to write it in that 1-2-4 style so...

*Kasai* · Oct 20, 2006, 03:20 AM

It actually made since! Wow, I liked it. Good job. A little capitalization would be nice.

*ketaro* · Oct 20, 2006, 03:52 AM

hehehe, i really like that poem, it kinda remind me of some old saying related to that.

*solking* · Oct 20, 2006, 07:01 AM

That was good.
It made me laugh a bit.
I haven't seen this style before either I must look into it.

*BlueFox1* · Oct 20, 2006, 07:45 AM

The poem is pretty good and the fact that you were talking about yourself makes it even better! Especially since you teacher couldn't figure it out! Thanks for sharing it!

*fayt lingod* · Oct 22, 2006, 05:29 PM

thanx everyone, i'll fix the capitalization problem too.

Oct 19, 2006, 03:34 PM	#1 (permalink)
fayt lingod Guardian of Heaven Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: in front of my computer Posts: 1,505 Thanks: 3 Thanked 5 Times in 5 Posts Credits: 4,474	no title this is a poem i had to write for school in some stupid persian style. my teacher thought it was funny, i never told him that i was accually describing myself My life is like a computer Where no one can find the muter and whenever I get too tired I just use the old rebooter. lol, tell me what you think. i had to write it in that 1-2-4 style so... __________________ thanks to zyta for the sick sig and avy! click here myspace Last edited by fayt lingod; Oct 22, 2006 at 05:30 PM. Reason: sugestion for capitalization
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Kasai Domme Join Date: Nov 2004 Location: Florida Posts: 2,745 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 1,616	Re: no title It actually made since! Wow, I liked it. Good job. A little capitalization would be nice. __________________ Seduced by Flesh
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solking 4.01 M33-2 Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: In Posts: 1,494 Thanks: 3 Thanked 8 Times in 7 Posts Credits: 13,537	Re: no title That was good. It made me laugh a bit. I haven't seen this style before either I must look into it. __________________
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BlueFox1 Devoted Otaku Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: A place called Midnight Sun know as Tranquility Posts: 584 Thanks: 8 Thanked 6 Times in 6 Posts Credits: 1,286	Re: no title The poem is pretty good and the fact that you were talking about yourself makes it even better! Especially since you teacher couldn't figure it out! Thanks for sharing it! __________________
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fayt lingod Guardian of Heaven Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: in front of my computer Posts: 1,505 Thanks: 3 Thanked 5 Times in 5 Posts Credits: 4,474	Re: no title thanx everyone, i'll fix the capitalization problem too. __________________ thanks to zyta for the sick sig and avy! click here myspace
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