Nice poem Rave ^_^
I do think it drag on for a long time, but very nice.
^_^ lol
Okay I am tired of being used.
Tired of people saying I'm too young.
To love and live on my own, that is.
It really aggrivates me.
I'll tell you these things.
Don't let me be bossed around by you.
Because I'm no servant of you.
I'm not a bottom dweller.
You can spit your insults at me
But nothing you say is gonna change me.
I'm sick of this waiting.
So let me take my shot.
I'm too young I said, too immature.
Ever considered why I act like this?
Ignore me like I'm nothing
Because if you do you're the bigger idiot.
You said we were together, when I asked you
"No we are not"
So when I leave you freaking get upset
And when I get mad you ignore me big time.
What is to you? Is your mind too freaking dumb?
Or is it that you don't want to listened to my thoughts?
Then you tell people wrong things about me
And everyone ends up hating me.
I really hate it when you ignore me
I detest the moment when I'm left
I despise people who think of me a pest
I'm SICK AND TIRED OF IT.
I'm sick and tired of you calling me worthless
I'm aggrivated the way you insult and hurt me
I am upset the way you hate me
I am freaking ANNOYED because you don't listen to me!
You keep on blocking me
And when I hurt myself
I'm too immature
You cage me inside suffocation.
I am sorry
I am sorry I ever cared for you
I am sorry I love you
Thank you for being an idiot and hurting me
Thank you for the hell you've caused me
Thank you for nothing.
I feel like I'm gonna end soon
But no, maybe you have to hurt me more?
Or maybe completely shatter me
And go out with someone mature? And not me?
Nice poem Rave ^_^
I do think it drag on for a long time, but very nice.
^_^ lol
It's a really nice poem..and I can kinda understand what you feel like...
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omg rave thats great but theres some sadness in it tho and yeah every one can relate to it too thats gaves it more ponts if i could i would gave u 10/10
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Rave,
This poem is awesome and I like the subject of this peom! Keep up the awesome work, and if I may make a suggestion may you can name the poem "Exhausted" just a thought!
A good but sad poem. Keep up the good work.![]()
Thanks for the sig Solking!! I love it!!
Cool poem Rushil! =^.^= I lked it and give it a 10/10!!! Yaaayyyyyy!!!!
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