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Old Dec 23, 2006, 04:33 PM   #1 (permalink)
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My life is so boring, my life is so dull
No excitement, no craze, no hint of a pull

I need something, someone to come along
A sweet someone special to sing me a song

Just a thought of that life makes me dizzy
Adventure and fun, my heart’s in a tizzy

These white-washed walls disillusion my soul
Life’s grueling routine has taken her toll

But hey, who’s to blame everything is flawed
Too bad though, my dream ain’t no fraud

I’ve still got my tiny little hope
Until then though, I’ll just have to cope

But my heart skips a beat
When I think of my special someone I’ve yet to meet

So now take a hike, go away, and let me be
I want to be alone again, just my mind and me

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Just a little something I wrote to try and help me out of my writers block... as you can see.. it failed.
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Old Dec 24, 2006, 08:14 AM   #2 (permalink)
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I like the rhyming. However, the wording of the first stanza is completely boring.
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Old Dec 24, 2006, 08:23 AM   #3 (permalink)
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I like the rhyming. However, the wording of the first stanza is completely boring.
I agree but then again if you read it you'll see the first stanza is just a reflection of the author's boring life. All in all it's not that bad.
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Old Dec 25, 2006, 08:53 AM   #4 (permalink)
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Nice rhyming, the first stanza is pretty kool. It gives a sense of emoness.
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