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    Your saying that u yourself didn't experiance the words of the poem but they seem familar as if a memory or something. If not i am completely lost.

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    me too vato, but the person in the poem is not, he has to choose like he's own different way of living, either become something that he wants to be or not the other way.

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    I think you did and nice job on this poem the only suggestion I have is changing goe's just remove the apostrophe and that will correct the problem! Nice job homey!

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    I like your choice of the words in this poem. I think that if we understood it better that it wouldn't seem meaningless as kasai said in her post.
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