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![]() Hell Enforcer Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: Somewhere in SD.
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![]() ![]() Credits: 24,802 | -no title- Days end at dawn Tommorrow is another one People sleeping at night But, during the day they are having fun Night time is when they are tired Family going to the park Couples sleeping in a bed Lights out at dark Days go by fast Night time is slow Time won't last Minutes go by flow haha I just thought it out, sounds cheesy, so please tell me what you think. T_T |
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![]() Otaku | Re: -no title- ok... I like it though I don't quite understand the meaning. Your rhyming seems a bit forced too. But I like the theme of the dark. I went through a stage where all I would write about was night time. I'm actually working on one now. Can't wait to read more. ^_^
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| Why so serious? | Re: -no title- Nice poem, hellknight! I especially like this part: Quote:
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![]() Credits: 110 | Re: -no title- it doesn't sound cheesy. I pictured my day when its day time and how the world would look if all the lights went out. At night it feels like time do seem to slow down preparing for another day. |
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