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ok... I like it though I don't quite understand the meaning. Your rhyming seems a bit forced too.

But I like the theme of the dark. I went through a stage where all I would write about was night time. I'm actually working on one now. Can't wait to read more. ^_^

Nice poem, hellknight! I especially like this part:

Days go by fast
Night time is slow
Time won't last
Minutes go by flow

So true. Time goes by very quickly, almost too quick, so we have to cherish every minute we have. Good job at a quick poem. I ejoyed it ^ ^

it doesn't sound cheesy. I pictured my day when its day time and how the world would look if all the lights went out. At night it feels like time do seem to slow down preparing for another day.