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Each day I see
The world ahead of me
When I climb so high
And I like what I see
Am in love with the sad world
I just wanna shout
Because this place
It's something going in and out
The people that go by me
I see only their fate
Only anger and madness
It's something they hate
I think this is good but I don't know, what do you guys think?
Well... this is ok, but I've seen better from you...
I like the fact that you're writing about the people of today- it's nice to read somthing that is not about love and relationships time to time...
Maybe this poem doesn't need a title- because it's so short- the poem can only speak for itself...
Anyways, I'll be waiting forward for more! ^^
dude you can do so much better your the one who inspired me to write poems but its still good