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    Each day I see
    The world ahead of me
    When I climb so high
    And I like what I see

    Am in love with the sad world
    I just wanna shout
    Because this place
    It's something going in and out

    The people that go by me
    I see only their fate
    Only anger and madness
    It's something they hate

    I think this is good but I don't know, what do you guys think?

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    Well... this is ok, but I've seen better from you...

    I like the fact that you're writing about the people of today- it's nice to read somthing that is not about love and relationships time to time...

    Maybe this poem doesn't need a title- because it's so short- the poem can only speak for itself...

    Anyways, I'll be waiting forward for more! ^^

    My recommended fanfic: "Dreamer" by Scourge

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    dude you can do so much better your the one who inspired me to write poems but its still good

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