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Reply With Quotehmm... this is a speech from someone who has lost something and hoped he will not lose another... right?
A very well written poem..the flow was very nice... ^^ and the mood fits well with the poem.. keep it up ^^
I look into my own eyes.
The mirror reflecting my soul,
as I gaze deeply,
into the doorway to me.
I see past my green ring,
and into the blackness,
of the pupil,
that holds my being.
I see nothing....
not me...
not the one I'm seeking...
and not who I use to be.
I simply see the eyes,
of a man...
broken and alone,
who has had everything taken away.
I don't look into eyes anymore.
I'm afraid I'll see,
something that I don't have,
or that I want that I can't get.
My biggest fear...
is the fear of losing her.
or the fear...
that she is already lost.
......
Far be it for me to be anything special, when the only special thing I desire with me, is the special person I share my gifts with.
hmm... this is a speech from someone who has lost something and hoped he will not lose another... right?
A very well written poem..the flow was very nice... ^^ and the mood fits well with the poem.. keep it up ^^
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Hmmm... I like this poem very much ^^ It just made my hear beat faster. Very sad and very scary for me.... I think you' ve done a great work, it has a nice rythm and it is quite simple.
At first I had problems understanding what are you sayig but it got clear at about the third stranza, it felt a bit odd, but maybe it's only good because it made me get deeper into the poem and search for all meanings.
Anyways nice poem, I enjoyed reading this and I hope to see more ^^
aww the feeling of blaming yourself for lose of someone close to you is very hard to deal with. Its one thing that I can relate to and also fear losing someone close to me.
It really was well written and it flowed really well. I was able to feel what you were feeling as I read it. I loved the last two stanza's especially as they really captured the feeling of the poem rather well as well as ending the poem in such a good way.
It really was a great poem and I hope to see more to come
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