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I can see why there is no title.
as for it being mediocre, nonsense. I actually think that it,
has a sort of jumbled feel to it, which is quite good.
above all it is a unique poem that you gave to us, so well done.

well I actually liked it.

I have to say though I did have to read it twice to get most of what its saying I like it.

And I like how you have every othe line rhymeing that adds a nice touch to it though I the flow of it kinda threw me off a bit.

but it is a good poem and it gets you to thinking really.
I like it! two thumbs up from me!
^_^

Originally Posted by P.R. Princes

well I actually liked it.

I have to say though I did have to read it twice to get most of what its saying I like it.

And I like how you have every othe line rhymeing that adds a nice touch to it though I the flow of it kinda threw me off a bit.

but it is a good poem and it gets you to thinking really.
I like it! two thumbs up from me!
^_^

thank you, thank you *bow*
i really love to write stuff like this. only i feel like my poems are like bic razors, instantly disposable after use.