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    Somehow you have to fight
    No giving up in life
    You have your right
    Walking on the edge of a knife

    You will have your day
    Something to do
    Something to say
    But, only for you

    Jump from the sky
    Land on the earth
    A place to die
    But, live from birth

    lol I just made this one up so, please comment

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    Re: no title again

    Quote Originally Posted by hellknight View Post
    Somehow you have to fight
    No giving up in life
    You have your right
    Walking on the edge of a knife

    You will have your day
    Something to do
    Something to say
    But, only for you

    Jump from the sky
    Land on the earth
    A place to die
    But, live from birth

    lol I just made this one up so, please comment
    That is deep, I could see someone walking alone in a blood soked robe pondering his/her existance.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Mattness View Post
    That is deep, I could see someone walking alone in a blood soked robe pondering his/her existance.
    am a he boy, lol, thanks i apprecaite it alot lol

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    Quote Originally Posted by hellknight View Post
    am a he boy, lol, thanks i apprecaite it alot lol
    I wasn't talking about you specificaly... no insult intended. I really do like the idea!

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    Quote Originally Posted by Mattness View Post
    I wasn't talking about you specificaly... no insult intended. I really do like the idea!
    I know, but my poem does have a meaning like you said, and i have to agree with you about it too

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    Re: no title again

    To me it seems as though each verse has it's own meaning. I am not saying I don't like it it's just try and relate the verses alittle better. Other then that its fine keep up the great work Hellie
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