Blade X

People walk past me,
To me, they're blurry
I cant see their faces,
They're caught in a cycle.

The air I breath in,
Soomes so artifical,
I cant help but believe,
Feel everything is a dream,

But I cant control the dream,
I feel so heavy,
My hands, heart, head,
They dont seem to move.

My eyes seem to close off,
Shut out the world before me,
But I feel something so real,
The touch opens my eyes.

The people walking past are still a blur,
But there is a single clear face,
Her angelic face, silk skin, bright hair,
She has become my salvation.

i dunno if this is finished or not coz i jus wrote it down during school lesson...plz tell me and enjoy

__________________

Sazzy

thats a really cool poem!!!

I take you are referring to your loved one who has the clear face. i like that a lot!!! its stands out and shows what love can mean to someone..great work Blade

__________________

hinata89

awsome. what more can be said.

TaurusDemon23

I liked it. Made sense. I felt that way in school several times as well.

Midknightdeath

I loved feeling like that almost as much as I hated it. The strange combination of dissasociation, euphoria and depression. It's one of the more complex emotions. Kudos to striking it!

Also, I don't know if it was on purpose, but soomes was awesome. Like shorting assumes. It kind of threw me off, but eventually my mind set on it and now I like it with soomes.

Good stuff!