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    People walk past me,
    To me, they're blurry
    I cant see their faces,
    They're caught in a cycle.

    The air I breath in,
    Soomes so artifical,
    I cant help but believe,
    Feel everything is a dream,

    But I cant control the dream,
    I feel so heavy,
    My hands, heart, head,
    They dont seem to move.

    My eyes seem to close off,
    Shut out the world before me,
    But I feel something so real,
    The touch opens my eyes.

    The people walking past are still a blur,
    But there is a single clear face,
    Her angelic face, silk skin, bright hair,
    She has become my salvation.

    i dunno if this is finished or not coz i jus wrote it down during school lesson...plz tell me and enjoy

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    Re: No title (sorry)

    thats a really cool poem!!!

    I take you are referring to your loved one who has the clear face. i like that a lot!!! its stands out and shows what love can mean to someone..great work Blade
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    Re: No title (sorry)

    awsome. what more can be said.

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    Re: No title (sorry)

    I liked it. Made sense. I felt that way in school several times as well.
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    Re: No title (sorry)

    I loved feeling like that almost as much as I hated it. The strange combination of dissasociation, euphoria and depression. It's one of the more complex emotions. Kudos to striking it!

    Also, I don't know if it was on purpose, but soomes was awesome. Like shorting assumes. It kind of threw me off, but eventually my mind set on it and now I like it with soomes.

    Good stuff!

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