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    (no tittile)

    As the hammer falls the room draws
    its ear to the center court, and a whisper
    can't be heard as word's that proclaim
    change fill the room and ears sharpen.

    Voices murmur as the proclamations come
    to an end ,people scatter as thoughts and
    idea's seem to be abound from the coming
    changes, all want something but few know what
    it is they want .

    As time goes on and people begin
    accept the change things said and done
    with good intent become the new building
    blocks for the change ,no more bitterness
    from the unknown everyone smile's and
    they move on.


    wasnt sure what to put as a titile so
    i kept it blank but its abnout change and how
    some go against it but eventually go with the flow
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    I really liked your poem. I think change is like that and some people are afraid of it,but change can be good. Keep up the good work and I can't wait to read your next one.
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    Re: (no tittile)

    Once again Bro awesome job on your poem! I like this style and I have to agree with Cherryblossom18 that people are afraid of change! Keep up the awesome job Bro, and try to stay out of trouble! lol!

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    lol i will no prob and im glad you like it and i will
    try to make another

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    Awesome as always big bro!! And i'd have 2 agree with Sis and Fox.Alot of people are scared of change and some even run away from it.But not all changes are bad,so can be good at times. But awesome job once again big bro! Can't wait 2 see the next 1.
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    Re: (no tittile)

    I really like what you're trying to do here. however, the punctuation is messing up the flow. Fixing that would make this a good poem.
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