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Jan 23, 2007, 03:02 AM
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| King Of Darkness  Join Date: May 2006 Location: someplace where the only light is the moon above
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 Credits: 3,310 | (no tittile) As the hammer falls the room draws its ear to the center court, and a whisper can't be heard as word's that proclaim change fill the room and ears sharpen. Voices murmur as the proclamations come to an end ,people scatter as thoughts and idea's seem to be abound from the coming changes, all want something but few know what it is they want . As time goes on and people begin accept the change things said and done with good intent become the new building blocks for the change ,no more bitterness from the unknown everyone smile's and they move on. wasnt sure what to put as a titile so i kept it blank but its abnout change and how some go against it but eventually go with the flow Last edited by HolderOfTheDarkChalice; Jan 23, 2007 at 05:02 AM. Reason: delete this please |
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Jan 23, 2007, 04:00 AM
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Credits: 2,366 |  Re: (no tittile) I really liked your poem. I think change is like that and some people are afraid of it,but change can be good. Keep up the good work and I can't wait to read your next one.
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Jan 23, 2007, 09:44 AM
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| Upcoming Legend  Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: A place called Midnight Sun know as Tranquility
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Credits: 1,176 | Re: (no tittile) Once again Bro awesome job on your poem! I like this style and I have to agree with Cherryblossom18 that people are afraid of change! Keep up the awesome job Bro, and try to stay out of trouble! lol! 
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Jan 23, 2007, 11:49 AM
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| King Of Darkness Join Date: May 2006 Location: someplace where the only light is the moon above
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Credits: 3,310 | Re: (no tittile) lol i will no prob and im glad you like it and i will try to make another |
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Jan 23, 2007, 07:34 PM
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| In The Arms Of My Lover  Join Date: Mar 2006 Location: In Axel's Closet!! *watch's him sleep* XD
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Credits: 3,363 | Re: (no tittile) Awesome as always big bro!! And i'd have 2 agree with Sis and Fox.Alot of people are scared of change and some even run away from it.But not all changes are bad,so can be good at times.  But awesome job once again big bro! Can't wait 2 see the next 1.
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Jan 24, 2007, 02:08 AM
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Credits: 1,490 | Re: (no tittile) I really like what you're trying to do here. however, the punctuation is messing up the flow. Fixing that would make this a good poem.
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