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| ♡♥I love you Kyle Kun!♥♡ Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: In my lovers heart
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![]() Credits: 13,226 | ????? No tittle ???? Handsome, charming, Kind Is what you are Feet, meters, miles That's just too far Sweet, beautiful, unique Like you tell me You, me, us We're meant to be Hugging, holding, Kissing Is what we do Brave, fierce, gentle Is why I love you Truth, dreams, wishes Are they real??? Love, joy, happy Is what I feel Together, lovers, hearts Will last forever Goodbye, farewell, later That would be never I'm sucking real bad but I don't care!!!! Hope you like it! ![]()
__________________ ♡♥♡♥No matter what I'll always love you for Eternity...I love you Kyle♥♡♥♡ ♡♥Anime Life♥♡ Never let me go... hold me tight and love me like I do ![]() Last edited by KuwiRules145; Jul 23, 2007 at 05:06 PM. Reason: Mispell so sorry!!!! |
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![]() Credits: 2,187 | Re: ????? No tittle ???? thats an awesome poem. i love it no matter what. GODD JOB!!
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![]() Credits: 49,619 | Re: ????? No tittle ???? Sucking!? I think this is great!!! One of your best I'm sure... very nice and full of love but it isn't banal- shows love from its best side... wonderful! Nice work ^^ It makes me feel all warm and fuzzy ^^ I'll be really waiting forward for more!!! |
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![]() Credits: 1,700 | Re: ????? No tittle ???? This poem really shows true feelings. I don't really think it suck,actually I love it. I think the rhyming was good at some points^^
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Newbie | Re: ????? No tittle ???? i think this poem was far better than the last one i read from you flow was much better and it was much easier to read, really an improvement, keep it up I especially like this combo "Handsome, charming, Kind Is what you are Feet, meters, miles That's just too far" For this line We're ment to be(do you mean meant?, there is no such word as ment unless its a purposeful mispelling ie. pwn xP) Brave, fierce, genital(i think you mean gentle? Genital=pertaining to the sexual organs. Gentle=kind) |
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