thats an awesome poem.
i love it no matter what.
GODD JOB!!
Handsome, charming, Kind
Is what you are
Feet, meters, miles
That's just too far
Sweet, beautiful, unique
Like you tell me
You, me, us
We're meant to be
Hugging, holding, Kissing
Is what we do
Brave, fierce, gentle
Is why I love you
Truth, dreams, wishes
Are they real???
Love, joy, happy
Is what I feel
Together, lovers, hearts
Will last forever
Goodbye, farewell, later
That would be never
I'm sucking real bad but I don't care!!!! Hope you like it!
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Last edited by KuwiRules145; Jul 23, 2007 at 04:06 PM. Reason: Mispell so sorry!!!!
「When I'm sad, I stop being sad and be awesome instead」
thats an awesome poem.
i love it no matter what.
GODD JOB!!
IF YOU LISTEN CLOSELY, YOU CAN HEAR MY HEART BEATING FOR YOU.
THIS BEAUTIFUL SIG MADE BY LASURA=D
Sucking!? I think this is great!!! One of your best I'm sure... very nice and full of love but it isn't banal- shows love from its best side... wonderful! Nice work ^^ It makes me feel all warm and fuzzy ^^
I'll be really waiting forward for more!!!
This poem really shows true feelings.
I don't really think it suck,actually I love it.
I think the rhyming was good at some points^^
Become a wind, unfathomable distress. I'll hold back your loneliness.
OMG!!!!!That was the best poem i have read so far.SUCKING????????No your not this is so great i cant get over it.Its just so good!!!!
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