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KuwiRules145 · Jul 22, 2007, 08:32 PM

Handsome, charming, Kind
Is what you are

Feet, meters, miles
That's just too far

Sweet, beautiful, unique
Like you tell me

You, me, us
We're meant to be

Hugging, holding, Kissing
Is what we do

Brave, fierce, gentle
Is why I love you

Truth, dreams, wishes
Are they real???

Love, joy, happy
Is what I feel

Together, lovers, hearts
Will last forever

Goodbye, farewell, later
That would be never

I'm sucking real bad but I don't care!!!! Hope you like it!

BAUTIFULSOUL · Jul 22, 2007, 08:37 PM

thats an awesome poem.
i love it no matter what.
GODD JOB!!

KuwiRules145 · Jul 22, 2007, 08:48 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by BAUTIFULSOUL

thats an awesome poem.
i love it no matter what.
GODD JOB!!

Really!!!!! Thank you!!!!!! Thank you!!!!!!!!!!!! I really thank you so Thank you!!!!!

*Lasura* · Jul 23, 2007, 06:21 AM

Sucking!? I think this is great!!! One of your best I'm sure... very nice and full of love but it isn't banal- shows love from its best side... wonderful! Nice work ^^ It makes me feel all warm and fuzzy ^^

I'll be really waiting forward for more!!!

KuwiRules145 · Jul 23, 2007, 01:52 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Lasura

Sucking!? I think this is great!!! One of your best I'm sure... very nice and full of love but it isn't banal- shows love from its best side... wonderful! Nice work ^^ It makes me feel all warm and fuzzy ^^

I'll be really waiting forward for more!!!

Really! Yah!!!! Thank you Lasura!!!!! Thank you thank you so thank you!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Seirika · Jul 23, 2007, 02:14 PM

This poem really shows true feelings.
I don't really think it suck,actually I love it.
I think the rhyming was good at some points^^

KuwiRules145 · Jul 23, 2007, 03:05 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Seirika

This poem really shows true feelings.
I don't really think it suck,actually I love it.
I think the rhyming was good at some points^^

Really!!!! Thank you too!!!!! So thank you so much!!!!!!!!

Little negi sensei · Jul 23, 2007, 03:31 PM

OMG!!!!!That was the best poem i have read so far.SUCKING????????No your not this is so great i cant get over it.Its just so good!!!!

KuwiRules145 · Jul 23, 2007, 04:21 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Little negi sensei

OMG!!!!!That was the best poem i have read so far.SUCKING????????No your not this is so great i cant get over it.Its just so good!!!!

Yah!!!!!!!! Thank you! Thank you as well!!!!! So YAH!!!! (Claps with joy)

kamikazekrn · Jul 23, 2007, 04:52 PM

i think this poem was far better than the last one i read from you

flow was much better and it was much easier to read, really an improvement, keep it up

I especially like this combo
"Handsome, charming, Kind
Is what you are

Feet, meters, miles
That's just too far"

For this line
We're ment to be(do you mean meant?, there is no such word as ment unless its a purposeful mispelling ie. pwn xP)

Brave, fierce, genital(i think you mean gentle? Genital=pertaining to the sexual organs. Gentle=kind)

KuwiRules145 · Jul 23, 2007, 05:04 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by kamikazekrn

i think this poem was far better than the last one i read from you

flow was much better and it was much easier to read, really an improvement, keep it up

I especially like this combo
"Handsome, charming, Kind
Is what you are

Feet, meters, miles
That's just too far"

For this line
We're ment to be(do you mean meant?, there is no such word as ment unless its a purposeful mispelling ie. pwn xP)

Brave, fierce, genital(i think you mean gentle? Genital=pertaining to the sexual organs. Gentle=kind)

Oops!!!!! Sorry! I guess I just hate correcting things heheheheee....I'll fix it I guess..... But thank you and all!!!! Thanks bunch!

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KuwiRules145 Tournaments Won: 2 ♡♥I love you Kyle Kun!♥♡ Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: In my lovers heart Posts: 963 Thanks: 3 Thanked 24 Times in 16 Posts Credits: 13,226	????? No tittle ???? Handsome, charming, Kind Is what you are Feet, meters, miles That's just too far Sweet, beautiful, unique Like you tell me You, me, us We're meant to be Hugging, holding, Kissing Is what we do Brave, fierce, gentle Is why I love you Truth, dreams, wishes Are they real??? Love, joy, happy Is what I feel Together, lovers, hearts Will last forever Goodbye, farewell, later That would be never I'm sucking real bad but I don't care!!!! Hope you like it! __________________ ♡♥♡♥No matter what I'll always love you for Eternity...I love you Kyle♥♡♥♡ Never let me go... hold me tight and love me like I do ♡♥Anime Life♥♡ Last edited by KuwiRules145; Jul 23, 2007 at 05:06 PM. Reason: Mispell so sorry!!!!
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BAUTIFULSOUL Diamond in the Rough Join Date: Jun 2007 Location: ontario, canada Posts: 125 Thanks: 0 Thanked 2 Times in 2 Posts Credits: 2,187	Re: ????? No tittle ???? thats an awesome poem. i love it no matter what. GODD JOB!! __________________ IF YOU LISTEN CLOSELY, YOU CAN HEAR MY HEART BEATING FOR YOU. THIS BEAUTIFUL SIG MADE BY LASURA=D
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kamikazekrn Newbie Join Date: Nov 2004 Location: SoCali Posts: 46 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 219	Re: ????? No tittle ???? i think this poem was far better than the last one i read from you flow was much better and it was much easier to read, really an improvement, keep it up I especially like this combo "Handsome, charming, Kind Is what you are Feet, meters, miles That's just too far" For this line We're ment to be(do you mean meant?, there is no such word as ment unless its a purposeful mispelling ie. pwn xP) Brave, fierce, genital(i think you mean gentle? Genital=pertaining to the sexual organs. Gentle=kind)
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