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    Handsome, charming, Kind
    Is what you are

    Feet, meters, miles
    That's just too far

    Sweet, beautiful, unique
    Like you tell me

    You, me, us
    We're meant to be

    Hugging, holding, Kissing
    Is what we do

    Brave, fierce, gentle
    Is why I love you

    Truth, dreams, wishes
    Are they real???

    Love, joy, happy
    Is what I feel

    Together, lovers, hearts
    Will last forever

    Goodbye, farewell, later
    That would be never

    I'm sucking real bad but I don't care!!!! Hope you like it!
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    「When I'm sad, I stop being sad and be awesome instead」

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    thats an awesome poem.
    i love it no matter what.
    GODD JOB!!

    IF YOU LISTEN CLOSELY, YOU CAN HEAR MY HEART BEATING FOR YOU.
    THIS BEAUTIFUL SIG MADE BY LASURA=D


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    Quote Originally Posted by BAUTIFULSOUL View Post
    thats an awesome poem.
    i love it no matter what.
    GODD JOB!!
    Really!!!!! Thank you!!!!!! Thank you!!!!!!!!!!!! I really thank you so Thank you!!!!!
    「When I'm sad, I stop being sad and be awesome instead」

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    Sucking!? I think this is great!!! One of your best I'm sure... very nice and full of love but it isn't banal- shows love from its best side... wonderful! Nice work ^^ It makes me feel all warm and fuzzy ^^

    I'll be really waiting forward for more!!!

    My recommended fanfic: "Dreamer" by Scourge

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    Quote Originally Posted by Lasura View Post
    Sucking!? I think this is great!!! One of your best I'm sure... very nice and full of love but it isn't banal- shows love from its best side... wonderful! Nice work ^^ It makes me feel all warm and fuzzy ^^

    I'll be really waiting forward for more!!!
    Really! Yah!!!! Thank you Lasura!!!!! Thank you thank you so thank you!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    「When I'm sad, I stop being sad and be awesome instead」

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    This poem really shows true feelings.
    I don't really think it suck,actually I love it.
    I think the rhyming was good at some points^^

    Become a wind, unfathomable distress. I'll hold back your loneliness.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Seirika View Post
    This poem really shows true feelings.
    I don't really think it suck,actually I love it.
    I think the rhyming was good at some points^^
    Really!!!! Thank you too!!!!! So thank you so much!!!!!!!!
    「When I'm sad, I stop being sad and be awesome instead」

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    OMG!!!!!That was the best poem i have read so far.SUCKING????????No your not this is so great i cant get over it.Its just so good!!!!

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