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    Quote Originally Posted by Little negi sensei View Post
    OMG!!!!!That was the best poem i have read so far.SUCKING????????No your not this is so great i cant get over it.Its just so good!!!!
    Yah!!!!!!!! Thank you! Thank you as well!!!!! So YAH!!!! (Claps with joy)
    「When I'm sad, I stop being sad and be awesome instead」

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    i think this poem was far better than the last one i read from you

    flow was much better and it was much easier to read, really an improvement, keep it up

    I especially like this combo
    "Handsome, charming, Kind
    Is what you are

    Feet, meters, miles
    That's just too far"

    For this line
    We're ment to be(do you mean meant?, there is no such word as ment unless its a purposeful mispelling ie. pwn xP)

    Brave, fierce, genital(i think you mean gentle? Genital=pertaining to the sexual organs. Gentle=kind)

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    Quote Originally Posted by kamikazekrn View Post
    i think this poem was far better than the last one i read from you

    flow was much better and it was much easier to read, really an improvement, keep it up

    I especially like this combo
    "Handsome, charming, Kind
    Is what you are

    Feet, meters, miles
    That's just too far"

    For this line
    We're ment to be(do you mean meant?, there is no such word as ment unless its a purposeful mispelling ie. pwn xP)

    Brave, fierce, genital(i think you mean gentle? Genital=pertaining to the sexual organs. Gentle=kind)
    Oops!!!!! Sorry! I guess I just hate correcting things heheheheee....I'll fix it I guess..... But thank you and all!!!! Thanks bunch!
    Last edited by KuwiRules145; Dec 02, 2007 at 03:57 AM.
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    dont worry about it, its called peer editing
    I have never written a poem without at least 3 other people reading it and giving me crap about it... and edit, resubmit, edit, stare at my computer in fustration, resubmit, still wrong, go kill people in CS to relieve fustration, edit yet again, and hopefully me and the other people editing it are satisfied

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    i think it is really great poem me myselfcant write anything like that

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    Quote Originally Posted by runebearer00 View Post
    i think it is really great poem me myselfcant write anything like that
    Really!!! Thanks Bunch!!!!!!!!! Really! Thank you bunch!!!!!!! So thank you!
    「When I'm sad, I stop being sad and be awesome instead」

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    Re: ????? No tittle ????

    I thought this was one of your better works, Kuwi.

    I personally enjoy simple poems with with nice flow and rhyming.

    Definitely one of your best jobs!


    Thanks to _gwenibe_ for this awesome sig!

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