Thread: Noni, my dearest. Gone.

OMG rave that poem is soo good it has soo much emotion in it but its quite sad i cryed near the end of this it was real good great work

That was very good yet so sad, I feel were you come from on that note, it was very good.

Originally Posted by Shippo101

That was very good yet so sad, I feel were you come from on that note, it was very good.

Thanks guys, for your comments. They are appreciated. Thank you.

Rave I know how you feel. I have that kind of experience when my friend died as well. I know it is hard to let go someone you love so deeply in your heart. But I hope that Noni will find a beautiful place with God. I felt sad with the poem because I remember my childhood best friend he also died. And it was too late for me to say how I feel. Still in my dreams I still see him with his warm smile. And that will also happen to you.

How deep! How sad! How beautiful!!!! I like this poem cause right now it just made my sister cry right now and I love the emotion in this! Hope to see more!

Originally Posted by Rave_Grip

I don't know where to start, the story just ended.
Your life, your dreams, your warmth now turned into coldness.
The moments we shared, the laughs we enjoyed,
Oh your everlasting asssurance-

Just gone, everything is so..
Empty.

Why did it happen so quickly? Why did you love me so much?
I wish I never met you..
But I was lucky that I did.
I can't explain how much I miss you!

Looking deep into each others' eyes, smiles wide,
Lips locked together, your smooth skin against mine
The love, the joy, the warmth, your exultant touches
Kept me so occupied being with you

I never expected this to happen
NOR did I EVER want it to occur
WHY you of all people!

I'm crying, the sorrow holding me tightly
My hands cold, tears flooding out of my wet eyes
Grieving for your return...

I want to be alone
I don't want to do anything with anyone anymore
You're gone
GONE!

I hope you're in a better place,
A place far reliable and comfortable than this hellish world
I won't forget our times
Nor your Last words
That you typed during your last 4 minutes...

"I'm sorry I lied
yes i was hit ,but I was not gettng better and the docters said
i don't have much time
but all you need to know ish
I lov.... "


Dead in her world, dead in her heart.
That is where she choose to start.....





For you, Noni

Was this a real experience?Well. I know where you come from, you're not alone...think of it this way:Wherever you go, they'll be there, and if you feel alone just talk to us, even me...

nice poem rave very deep of sad emotion ...oh my god what i will say ...i will start to cry ...
that's beutiful i know what you feel ?...good job ...